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[Scriptor Scorpio View Member Profile]

Well well...
It seems that the tenth chapter is arriving...
Right... Now!

(EDIT: I finished chapter 11 and I'll post it on nya_chan's birthday! (coincidence, or not?)
+ : Yaay, second page! *Sniff*, I think I'm getting emotional... Naah, just kidding... A bit...)

By the way… This is part 10! Celebrate!

(145 scrolls)

Anyone?



Oh, I get it... anyway, here it is...



Part 10: Anniversary/adversary


“Ow, my head... Hey, where is everybody?” Casper asked.

“Ow, my head...” Joe suddenly said.

“Stop doing that!”

(For all the ones that aren’t that smart, Casper was startled by Joe, because he

(Once again)

Appeared behind him)

“Hey, can I help it that someone with strong arms knocked me and you out?”


“Yes! Except the part about me, that’s not true.”

“You just don’t want to admit that you were knocked out by a girl…”

“What girl?”

“Oh, come on...”

“No really, where is she?”


The two looked around, but indeed, there was no trace of her...


“Where could she be?” Joe wondered.

“I think Team Revenge caught her, while you were knocked out...” Casper said…

“And what about you?”

“Who me? I tried to stop them, but it was already too late...”


Joe became very frustrated and said:

“Just admit it that you were knocked out by a girl!!!!!!”

“Oké, I’ll admit it...


(???)


You were knocked out by a girl!”

“Aaargh!”

“Héhé...”


This time, Joe decided that it wasn’t worth it to argue about it and went to search for clues which could lead to the cause of Mary’s disappearance...


A few hours later...



“Where could she be?” Casper thought…

I hope nothing happens to her... Not that I like her, or that she knocked me out... What? Now I’m even lying to myself? Wait a minute... That means I’m talking to myself! I’m a freak... Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!

“Hey, I found something...”

“Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!” Casper yelled, now out loud…

“What are you doing?”

“He mustn’t know I was talking to myself... Mmm... Aah! I’m doing it again!


“Hello?!”

“Stop doing that!”

Joe sighed, then said:

“Anyway, I’ve found a piece of her skirt nearby. It was hanging in a bush….

It was probably ragged off when they took her to their hideout...”

“And do you know, and I mean for sure because, of course, I have suggested it,”Casper proclaimed,

“That they took her there?”

“Because I saw their hideout…”

“Ooooooow...”

“So can we go now? We have a maiden to save...”

“Is she still...”

“I don’t know! That’s just what medieval knights always say when they’re going to save a

Princess or something...”

“Something what?”

“Stop stalling the story with your unneeded questions!!!”

“Oké oké...”


The two ‘knights’ quickly arrive near the hideout, where they develop a plan...


Meanwhile, in the hideout...


“Let me go!” she yelled…


Mary is tied up very good onto a chair and is screaming the grunts' ears out...


“Maybe if you do something for me...” the fifth Revenge grunt said,

While looking at Mary in an unpleasant way...

The Female grunt hit him in the face, saying:

“Pervert!”



(Wow, all the women in this story have strong arms... or at least, can deliver many and hard punches. Muhammed Ali, beware! There are new champions on the way that you won’t see coming...)



The fifth Revenge grunt rubbed the big bruise on his cheek,

(Casper: Hey, we are bruise brothers!)

“I just wanted to ask her stop yelling!” he yelled…

Mary and Female grunt responded with:

“Yeah right...”

Then the Female grunt said:

“This is how you should do it...”

Then she gagged Mary with a wide piece of tape...


”I hope Joe and Casper come here soon...” Mary thought…



Hey, now that you’re mentioning them...



“Nick (Starly) and Deke (Shiny Spearow), shred that door to pieces!” Casper ordered.


The two bird Pokémon destroy the door to the Team Revenge Hideout with their new move,

Steel Wing...

“Good, now come on...” Joe said…



The two sent out all of their Pokémon (Casper sent out: Shellos (Slug), Starly (Nick), Shiny Spearow (Deke) and Elekid (Lee) and Joe sent out Poochyena, Bidoof, Magby and Shiny Dustox.



On the way to the top floor, they defeated any Revenge grunt that dared come near them, sometimes even teaming up for a true double battle. After that, their teams looked like this:



Casper

(Slug) Lv. 16
(Nick) Lv. 15 (evolved from a )
(Deke) Lv. 15
(Lee) Lv. 16


Joe

Lv. 16
Lv. 15 (evolved from )
Lv. 16
Lv. 17

Mary

Lv. 10
Lv. 9
Lv. 9
Lv. 9



They were now very close to the head office...



“Bibarel, Rollout!”


Joe’s Bibarel bashed into the door and soon there wasn’t anything left of it, besides some scrap metal... But...


Joe looked into the room, then said:

“Huh?”

“What is it?” Casper asked.

“Eheheh...”

Casper also looked into the room, then yelled:

“This is the storage closet!”


“Eheheh... Little mistake?”

“Let me lead from now on...”

“Fine.”

Then Casper said with a-owner-talking-to-his-dog voice:


“Good boy.”


“Why you...”


“We haven’t got time, remember? We’ve got a maiden or something to save...”

“If you can remember it so well, why didn’t you get it the first time?”

“Meheheh... I was teasing you...”


“Well done. Is it your job maybe? Oh wait, you’re a Pokémon trainer. Mmm... Maybe you have double jobs... Mmmmmm... Maybe you have double LIVES! Mmmmmmmmm... Maybe you have a wife and kids in Manhattan, with a dog and cat that play happily with each other in the backyard of your big house in the same street Richie, or were it Decon S., lives!”

(This was all spoken rapidly in one breath)

“You have a rich imagination, you know?”

“Yeah, and I also have a time machine, that I can use to alter all reality!”

Then Joe laughed evily…

“That'd better be a joke...”

“Maybe...” Joe said, while lifting his eyebrows quickly up and down...

“Or maybe not!”

And then Joe laughed very evily…

“Oké... Welcome to the creep club, only member: you.”

(My life as a teenage robot quote)

“Yes! I’m part of a club!”

“Joe, listen very carefully to me...”


Joe’s left eye twitched, while he said:

“Yes?”


“The creep club is a bad place, a Bad place, you don’t want to be part of that...

“Yes...”

“No, you want to be good, ok?”

“Ok...”

Casper sighed relieved:

“I’m glad that is all cleared up...”



“Héhé, he fell for it... By the way, I was acting, all the time... Wait a minute, who am I talking to? Myself or the...



“Joe?”

Joe was startled this time and screamed:

“Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! Ghosts!

Oh sorry I mean phantoms... Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!”

He jumped into a room by breaking the door, what he does by jumping into it, like he is,


Well, actually,

Because he is insane...


Joe was quickly helped up by Casper, at which point they quickly saw where they’ve gotten themselves into...


Before them they saw…


“Hey hottie!” Joe said.

The Female Revenge grunt grunted:

(Like the name suggested)

“Grrr…”


In the head office…


“Now don’t growl dear, that’s not polite,” Joe remarked,

“You may do that when we're alone…”

It got too much for the Female Revenge grunt, so she said:

“That’s it! I challenge you!”

“For a kissing contest?”

“Grrr…”

“Now what have I said about that?”

“Pokémon battle!!!”

Bibarel VS. Mankey

Joe surprisingly wins, and very quickly, with Roll-outs from his strong Bibarel…

Joe won!

“You…”

“…Are cool, I know that.”

The Female Revenge grunt bursted like a bubble!

“Mmm… You look a little puff, is something wrong?”

In the mean while, Mary tried to catch someone’s attention…

“Oh sorry, here, let me help you…” Casper, then pulled off the tape very slowly…


Mary screamed, but then realised:

“Oh wait, that didn’t hurt.”

“Off course not, I did it very carefully.”

“Thank you…”

“You’re welcome.”


Joe looked silently at them, and they looked at each other, when suddenly…


“Guys, look out!” he said.


The fifth Revenge grunt ordered his Croagunk, which he had sent out, to use Pursuit!


“Stand back! Dustox, use Protect!” Joe said.


Dustox quickly used Protect,

(What else?)

And shielded everyone against the attack.


“Blast! But you can’t use it forever!” the fifth Revenge grunt yelled,

“Croagunk, use Pursuit again and again and again, until you hit them!”


A series of Pursuits followed. Dustox used Protect again and again, but soon he/she

(We don’t which gender it is)

Would fail

(If used in succession)…

Then Casper whispered:

I’ve got an idea… Quickly, let us through…”

“Oké, wait for it…” Joe said,

“Now!”


In the blink of an eye, Casper and Slug make their move…


“Slug, now! Use Hidden Power!”


Croagunk was struck by a mystic power and so… fainted!


Croagunk was defeated!


“Now, we must run before they send in reinforcements!” Casper said.

Mary & Joe looked at each other, then said:

“Oké. Come on!”


The three comrades got away safely…


The Female Revenge grunt had snapped out of her confusion

(Isn’t that only with Pokémon?)

And looked at them…


“Bye hottie…” Joe said…

The Female Revenge grunt exploded (???)…



Female Revenge grunt has destroyed the building… Female Revenge grunt fainted!



“She has a bit of a temper, but we’ll work on that…” Joe concluded…

Mary & Casper hitted each other with their heads, because of the lack of any closets…

“Don’t worry; we’ll work on that to…”


Later, at their camp site…


Joe wiped the sweat of his forehead, and then he said:

That was a long and hard day, huh?”

“Indeed,” Casper replied shortly.

“Couldn’t agree more…” Mary continued.

“Wow! World news, world news!” Casper suddenly said…

“What is it?” Joe asked.

“You two finally agree with each other! I should put this in the news paper…”

(Get it?)

“What’s so special about it?” Mary asked.

“It means you two finally get along!” Casper said.

“No, we don’t,” Joe said…

“Exactly.” Mary said.

“We don’t even agree with each other…” Joe said.

“Ehm… Yes, we do,” Mary said.

“Ehm… No, we don’t,” Joe said again…

Then the discussion began…

(Again…)

“Yes.”

“No.”

“True.”

“False.”

“Right.”

“Wrong.”

“Battle?” Mary asked.

“Yeah!” Joe replied.


(Was Mary right or Joe? Readers, may the voting begin... Please?)


The two wrestled

(This is beginning to be a habit…)

And screamed like crazy people… But that doesn’t matter… All that counts, is that they are doing it together. The same goes for their journey…



Casper sat atop a big rock and stared into the sky, as he watched the sun go under.

(Kids, don’t try this at home or anywhere else. The sun is bad for your eyes.

(But good for your tan. At least, if it’s not too much… Aaah… sunburn…))


He thought about his new life, his old life and his mission to disable the Game Pack…

After that, he talked to his father with the microphone, while holding the Pokéball of
Slug…



“Show me their teams,” Someone at the Revenge Headquarters said…

“Yes boss…” the fifth Revenge grunt said…


Casper

(Slug) Lv. 16
(Nick) Lv. 15
(Deke) Lv. 15
(Lee) Lv. 16


Joe

Lv. 16
Lv. 15
Lv. 16
Lv. 17

Mary

Lv. 10
Lv. 9
Lv. 9
Lv. 9



“Mmm… Interesting… “

EDIT2: You make me feel... So emotional...

What?! Are you still here?!

*turns off music*

Well, anyways,

Guess what: 156 scrolls!

(If you don't know what that means, PM me, quickly!)

And, I reached the 80th page in Word!

This post has been edited by Scriptor Scorpio: Aug 19 2008, 07:24 AM

[-JJ- View Member Profile]

nice update

I guess I have to update soon...

[Scriptor Scorpio View Member Profile]

Mmm...
On one hand,
I want to know what happens in your story,
but on the other hand,
you have still got more replies and views than me...
*Sigh* what to do...

Anyway,
one question...

How do you do that?!

*Everyone is blown away*

Oh no, there go my last readers...

*Snifff*

And, what do you think of the 10th chapter and the story in general?

TheJohnson3?

If that's his real name... What could it be, actually... Ah, your mind reading works here as well...

Noooooooooooooooooooooooo!

Ehm... Did I Woyell that out loud?

Where are you TheJohnson3?

Anyone?

EDIT: Could the ones that vote in the poll please explain themselves or just comment, because they're aren't many pollers, as you have noticed...

This post has been edited by Scriptor Scorpio: Feb 24 2008, 07:25 AM

[-JJ- View Member Profile]

I like that you actually have grammer for a script style.
there are some funny parts that keep me awake.
I woudn't adda poll to your next story, if you write another story.

call me JJ

[Scriptor Scorpio View Member Profile]

I like that you actually have grammar for a script style.
There are some funny parts that keep me awake.
I wouldn't add a poll to your next story, if you write another story.

call me JJ

Ok JJ,
and about the grammar... (read above what I changed)
And,
I've got an idea for another fanfic.
Do you know 'Reïncarnation', by Suzanne Weyn?
I just finished it.

P.S.: Which funny parts do you like the most?

[Scriptor Scorpio View Member Profile]

Hey,

Guess what!

It's update time!

Happy Birthday to nya_chan, happy birthday to nya_chan,
Happy birthday, dear nya_chan, happy birthday to you...

*accompagnies terrible voice with guitar that is played pretty good*

And now,
the moment you've all been waiting for...

(Note: After this I will not post another chapter until someone else then me posts)

And I have gotten enough to make Chapter 12...

With that, here it is!

(132 scrolls)

Now, after several months, My brothers and I present to you…

“Jellyfish!” João said.

And with that, his two older brothers fell over…


“Why do you say that?” I angrily asked.

“Well…” João began…

“You know only Matyas can say stuff that breaks the fourth wall, like

Johny X,

The mansion,

And…

Aliens from another planet!”

“Ok, we get the picture…” I said.

“But…” João rebelled…

“I…” Tim tried…

“Saw…” João tried further…

“What did you see, just tell us!” I screamed out of frustration…

“But…” João cleared his throat before saying,

“I really saw a jellyfish…”

“Where?” I asked, trying to cool down…

“In the living room just now…” my youngest brother said.

“And I really saw aliens from another planet!” Tim said…

…

“We have a straaaaaaange house,” I concluded.

“Well, actually I was referring to you guys…” Tim admitted.

“Why you…” I started…

“Begin!” João said, and this large title flung us in the face…

Part 11: Nasty!

“I wanna go home,” Joe wined.

The excitement of the past few days was too much for a simple guy like him and he needed some rest…

And with that, he fell on the ground!

“Lazy like always,” Mary said,

“Typical boys…”

Casper coughed… At that, Mary replied with her magic tricks

(AKA the pan)

“Ehm… Nothing…” Casper replied and Mary putted her pan away…


“Well, how are we going to deal with this?” Mary asked,”

“Because I ain’t gonna carry him all the way to… Where are we going exactly?”

“Well… ehm…” Casper said,


“I don’t know, the land is very large and wide… I guess the city where the next gym is…”

“And where is that?” Mary asked.

“In Mortanry, I guess…” Casper said…

“All the way back?!” Mary exclaimed,

“Why didn’t we go there in the first place?!”

“You have to do them in order, because each time they get stronger…” Casper said.

“Ok, I’ll make you a deal, we’ll go up and down the Province Twerpan,” Mary proposed,

“if we first go somewhere else…”

“And where might that be?” Casper asked.

“Here!” Mary said.

She pointed at a tiny city near Woyell Village on a map of the region Gumbeli…

(I love that name…)

“What’s that?” Casper asked.

It’s Nastwood, a tiny village with lots of beautiful castles and…” Mary began…

“No, I mean that red thingy…” Casper said, while pointing at a red thingy…

“That’s… Wait a minute, that’s just ketchup!” Mary complained,

“Joe!”


Joe, although still a bit sleepy, got up when he realised someone called, and asked:

“What is it?”

“Have you touched my…” Mary began…

(Again)

“Please don’t hurt me, I’ll never do it again!” Joe uttered,

“Don’t take out your pan please!”

“What are you talk…” Mary began…

(Again, again)

Then she put her hand on her chest and ‘remembered’ a ticklish feeling from the other night…

“Come here you, so I can bake omelets of your quadruple egg head,” she yelled, while running after the little pervert…


(Good thing she doesn’t know what I did… I’m thinking these lines so she can’t hear them…)

“I heard that!” João suddenly said.

“Not you again!” Tim replied.

“I’m ignoring you… For Matyas, I’m gonna te-e-ell!” João threatened…

“Come here you!” I said, fearing João would tell Mary about… Hey, I’m not telling you that!

Not out loud… And also not here! Nowhere! Never will you find out… Except if João tells Mary…

“Come here you!”


I chased him around like a madman…

“Sigh, kids…” Tim said.

“I’m not done with you either…” I said…

While I chased my brothers around, Mary was trying to catch Joe to hit him with her pan…

Suddenly, strange men began to surround the unsuspecting trisome… Casper noticed them first, and warned Mary and Joe…


They were with too many, but the three friends were not about to surrender…

Quickly, they sent in all their Pokémon,
and a little war began…

Just when Casper thought they were on the winning hand, a huge blast scattered the defenders and their trainers across the camp site…

Still feeling numb because of hitting a tree with a sore spot, Casper, still shaking, stood up to see what thing had done this…

What he saw, shocked him more then anyone in the world, except his dad…

On a huge Camerupt sat his own…

And now it’s time for commercials!

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Not only do you get rid of anyone that’s not nice to you,

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But you also have a lot of fun blasting them farther away than Team Rocket!

In other news,

Angry fans of the story ‘The Game Pack’, which has become legendary on Pokédox,

Tim: Cough cough, modest, cough…

Are storming the house of the genius behind the more then 80 pages now that is the bible, I mean the legend…

João: Very modest, cough cough…

And here is an exclusive interview with the writer himself, Matyas!

Matyas: “What?! Angry mob! But how did they know where I was? They couldn’t have solved the riddle… Unless…”

Houndoom101! TheJohnson3! BeSPe!

And that were the last moments of Matyas… Oh wait, he’s running for the laptop, and it seems that satisfies the mob… For now…

*Fans putting up camp in Matyas’ backyard*

Matyas: “But I don’t have a backyard… Oh oh, watch out for that car… Ah, I never really liked him… or her…”

Anyway, I guess I’ll continue this story after the last cliffhanger…

On a huge, fireblazing Camerupt that came to stop near the tree that Casper hit, sat his own, one and only…

Tim: Could you get on with it now!

João: Ssst! Be quiet, or else we’ll never find out…

Tim: Fine! *grumbles*

Well, as I was saying earlier, on a big, fireblazing, high-leveled Camerupt sat Casper’s own…

You know, I can probably best continue this scene with a little scene…

- Parody plays -

“Join the dark side,” the strange dark rider said.

“No, never! You hurt my friends, let my mother disappear… Wait, that was my father’s fault…” Casper said.

“But Casper, I am…” the rider began…

“Wait! Leave us,” the rider said to the grunts, while getting of the Camerupt…

The army of Revenge grunts went to discuss some matters and guard the camp site…

While Joe supported her, Mary came to Casper and the strange rider…

The rider asked: “Well Casper, aren’t you going to introduce me to your friends?”

“How does she know you name?” Joe wanted to know.

Casper kept staring to the mysterious rider, and couldn’t even utter a word…

“Well, I might as well introduce myself,” the rider said,

“I am Layla, Casper’s mother…



“His mother!” Joe explained.

“Ehm… Casper’s mother, ehm… Pleased to ehm… Meet you,” Mary uttered.


Casper was now examining his shoe laces, with the excuse of looking for dirt…

Wow, Casper’s mom is so hot… If I’d stand on my feet and look down… Would she notice?

Then, suddenly, Casper spoke up…


“Ehm, Mom, could I ask you something… Alone?”

“Off course dear,” she said.

Almost…, Joe thought while stretching his body…

Then,

He fell over…

While Mary laughed at the embarrassed boy, trying to get up, Casper had a secret conversation with his mother…

“So, what is it dear?” Casper’s mom asked with her soft, gentle voice…

“Do you know what’s going on?” Casper asked.

“Well, I see you’ve made friends and…” she began.

“No not that!” Casper exclaimed,

“I mean that we are in a ¨Pokémon world all of the sudden!”

“Yes dear, I know what your father hid in the basement, although I didn’t think you would find it…”

“So you know that Team Revenge is the evil organisation in this game!”

Casper’s yelling increased with every sentence…


In the mean while, Mary and Joe, or at least Joe, are curious about what is going on between Casper and his

hot mom…

“What is going on?” Joe wanted to know…

“I don’t know…” Mary said a bit dreamy…

“What do you think they’re talking about?”

“Sigh, I don’t know,” Mary said,

While increasing the softness in her voice without knowing it…

“Do you think they’re having a fight?”Joe asked.

“I DON’T KNOW!”

The softness in Mary’s voice disappeared and in its place anger and frustration came…

In the mean while, Layla,

(Casper’s hot mom)

Told her son about the situation she and Casper’s dad were in…

“It has been… rough, lately…

Between your father and me…

Actually, even since we were married, he spent most of his time, no, all of his time, on working on his secret project…

I found out about it when I looked over some of his notes… I was furious when I saw that he wasted his time on his ‘Pokémon’ he couldn’t stop talking and talking about…

Did he really neglect me, and probably you as well, for a computer game?

Angry as I was, I grabbed my chance when the world was changed into the Pokémon version by the Game Pack…

Just as I planned…

I took over Team Revenge and they got some strong Pokémon for me…

Oh yes, did Cammie hurt you much?

Let me see…”


Like a gentle mother, not the one that took over an evil organisation to teach her husband a lesson, she checked and took care of Casper’s injuries…


Still a bit gazed by this sudden revelation, Casper was taken back to Mary and Joe, because they were very close to killing each other, yet again…


This got Casper out of his gaze and he quickly separated the two ‘Dead or Alive’- teenagers, so they would both get the second option… ^

Layla was a bit worried about the two, but Casper has almost gotten used to it…

Whereas Casper worried about his mom leading a criminal corporation, she didn’t.

“Very strange”, he thought.

Now Casper had only one thing to say, and he asked his mom just before she went back to her ‘troups’, as she called it…

“Mom, Dad asked me to turn off the Game Pack…”

“I see,” she said,

“In that case, I’ll have to protect you against your father…”


What happened the next moment was very unclear…

Before Casper knew it, his mom had sent out her Camerupt…

Casper didn’t stand a chance…

But suddenly, hope came tumbling down…

A large Flygon dived and attacked Layla’s Camerupt with a Hyper Beam…

This gave Casper the chance to escape with Mary and Joe, who were still startled by the actions of Casper’s mother…


When they were far enough, the trisome took a rest…

“What was that all about?” Mary urgently wanted to know.

“Well, ehm…”

But before Casper could answer, the Flygon that saved them, landed, sweeping everyone off their feet with his air gusts, like a helicopter…

Now Casper could see what was on the Flygon’s back…

“Twinkle twinkle, little star…” João said out of nowhere…

“What are you doing now?” Tim wanted to know…

“Well…” João began…

“Aw! That hurts!”

João had pulled Casper’s glasses of his nose…

Then he put them on his own nose… Not a good idea it seemed, because everything became blurry…

After breaking a lot of valuable, or at least breakable, stuff, evading miraculously his own things, João experienced the same pain Casper felt…

“Aw! That hurts!”

Matyas had taken Casper’s glasses of João’s nose…

“I’ll take that, thank you,” Matyas said.

“Hey, those are my… Never mind…” João said,

“Anyway, I was creating a cliffhanger… Do you think they’ve waited long enough now?”

“Mmm…” Tim said…

“Play!” Matyas said.

(Casper's glasses are returned to him)


On the Flygon’s back, another familiar face popped up:

Casper’s father…

“Hello Joe, Casper…”

Joe and Casper introduced him to Mary…

“Oh, hello mister, pleased to meet you,” she said.

ҬPleased to meet you as well, young lady,

Casper, could I speak to you for a moment?”

“Eh yeah, off course…”


Casper followed his dad, while Mary and Joe were left to admire Casper’s dad’s Flygon, that was very docile, compared to the Hyper Beam he shot out at Layla’s Camerupt earlier…

In the mean while, Casper told his dad what had happened, and what his mom had told him about…

His dad told him to evade his mom as much as possible, defeat all the gyms, and also the Pokémon League, because that’s were the Game Pack and Casper’s Gameboy SP went to after the blast…

And, if Casper would run into the powerful Game Shark Pokémon of his mother, he should bring Joe and his girl-friend to safety and call him…

“But she isn’t my…” Casper began…

“Look, I’ve got to go now.

Team Revenge is probably looking for me and Flygon,

not to mention your mom and her oversized Camerupt who are out for us…

Call me when you get to…

Where will you go?”

“Oh, Mary asked to go to Nastwood for some reason…”

“Nastwood, yes… Anyway, call me when you get there, ok?”

“Ok.”

“See ya soon…”

Casper’s dad whistled for his Flygon, that quickly picked him up while flying by…

“Bye dad…”

“Hey, where did that big Flygon go?” Joe wanted to know…

“My father… had to go…” Casper explained…

“Ok… So where are we heading now?” Joe asked.

“Well…” Mary said mysteriously…

After a looooooooooooooooong hike…

“And, what do you guys think?” Mary asked.

“Wow,” Casper and Joe both said…


In the middle of a giant forest, big castles with little houses surrounding them stood proudly in the light that passed through an open space in the thick roof of leaves… Nastwood should be renamed, so Casper said.

“How do you… Oh yes,” Mary understanded,

“Nast comes from… Wait, I’ll show you…”

With impure thoughts, Casper awaited Mary’s…

…

Somersault?!

While the two boys were still amazed by Mary’s astounding and higly inexpected flexibility,

Mary apologized that it wasn’t that good…

“Good?!” Joe said in awe,

“That was… Amazing!”

“… Yes! How do you do that?” Casper asked, still gazed…

“Well, everyone here can,” Mary explained…

The next moment, Casper and Joe fell over from amazement…

When Joe had helped Casper up, he asked, while supporting his companion:

“How good are the other ones then?”

“Well, I was kinda bad, I finished almost last…”

At that, Casper and Joe fell over, yet again, and when they got up after the third time (!),

They were still stunned by the surprise…

“Well, anyway…” Mary said,

“If we want to get somewhere today, we have to get moving now…”

“Uh…” Casper began…

“Yeah, off course,” Joe added.

“Well, come on then…” Mary said.

And with that, they began exploring the city of Nastwood…




And now,

A call to possible readers…

Whoever finds out where I live through this story and not by illegal operations,

Will get a prize!

…

No, I’m serious…

…

…

Ah, come on!

…

…

…

Oh, I give up…

Back to the story…

*Relatively big audience applauses*

And I’m back…

*Everyone has disappeared*

Grrr… I’ll get you for that…

…

…

…

…

And with that, the story ends,

Muhahaha…

Well,

At least…

For now…

This post has been edited by Scriptor Scorpio: Aug 19 2008, 07:11 AM

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Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!

My 100th post!

Finally...

Well, I'd like to thank:

Me: You're welcome.

...

Myself: No problem.

...

And off course...

I: Mwuhahaha! World domination! Wait,
why is that red light flickering? Wait, are we on the air!
Noooooo, my beatiful plan!

Yes,
what would you expect?

It's not like someone else posts my posts...

*gets poked with a stick by some 'important people' *

Fine, fine...

Thanks to JJ, Houndoom101, my family, all of the readers (please post!), etc. etc. etc.!

*That is all*

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good story

[Scriptor Scorpio View Member Profile]

Thanks, I appreciate that.

What do you think of the comedy, the storyline, the characters?

Anyway, I'll write more chapters when I have less school work...

[Scriptor Scorpio View Member Profile]

10+31+30+18=89 days

You had to wait for part 12!

Loading it up... NOW!

Part 12: Back up and running!

Hello everyone! I hope everyone's in for a new part of 'The Game Pack- Iwish I'd never asked a gameboy'!

I'll try to update faster now that I have my own laptop.

As a present for all the waiting you all had to go through, not only do I have a new chapter for you, not only a few adjustments in the previous ones (read: all the previous ones), but also the pictures of most of the characters on top of the first post), all the way from Pokémon Crater, proudly made by the artists there!
(coming soon; I encountered some problems)
So now, without further ado, the 12th chapter... Er... part 12... (126 scrolls)

“Ok,are you sure your eyes are closed?” Mary asked Casper and Joe.

“Yes yes,” they said.

“Ok, then now, open them!”


Casper and Joe did what they were told and saw a mighty castle, with a

sign above the gate: 'Cup-cake bakery, served by the proud Blue girls'

“Welcome to the bakery!” she said.


When the trisome stepped into the pictorial castle, Mary was jumped by a sea of blue!

Casper and Joe were about to send out their Pokémon, when someone called Mary 'big sister'.

When the pile of blue went off of Mary, you could see that it were actually all girls and one woman, all dressed up in a different shade of blue...

“Guys, I would like you to meet the rest of the family; This is Lucy Blue, my youngest sister,” Mary began.

A little girl from around 5 years old with a very light blue dress stepped forward and shook Joe and especially Casper's hand, who she already seemed to adore.

“Then my second youngest sister Cerulea Blue.”

A girl from around 8 years old with a cerulean blue dress stepped forward and shook hands. She seemed to like Joe more.

“Turquoise Blue, my middle sister.”

A girl from around 11 years old with a turquoise dress stepped forward and took a bow.

“The second oldest sister, Navia Blue.”

A girl from around 14 years old with a darker, navy blue dress stepped forward and winked at Casper and Joe, but in a way, Mary didn't notice.

“And the oldest sister, Marina Blue,” the woman that stood behind the 5 sisters finished, while holding Mary and pushing her towards Casper (and Joe).

“Mom! My friends call me Mary!” Mary muttered.

“Yes, but you're still my little girl. I am Seara Blue, by the way,” and she shook Casper and Joe's hand, beginning with Casper of course.

“Pleased to meet you,” Joe said, while fantasying about two hot moms: Layla, Casper's mom and the woman dressed in different shades of blue, Seara Blue, like the sea, Mary's mom...
...

Seara in the mean while suggested Casper to eat some of their Cup-cakes, and so the trisome ended up eating a lot of Cup-cakes, sitting at the best table of the bakery...

“I'm truly sorry for the way my mom was acting. She's always trying to fix me up with every guy that walks into the bakery,” Mary said.

“But she didn't say anything to me!” Joe uttered.

Mary ignored it and continued to talk with Casper about the beautiful places they had to see in Nastwood, which got its name because of the large amount of gymnastic talent the villagers seem to have...

While Casper was looking intrigued into Mary's eyes, Joe interrupted him by asking for a fork...

Casper was still daydreaming a bit, because he had handed Joe a knife...

Quickly pulling himself away from the image of Mary's laughing face, he looked for a fork and gave it to Joe. But again, Joe had gotten a knife instead.

Casper now really concentrated and made sure he gave Joe a fork. Now, Joe had gotten a spoon!

Mary found this strange, since they didn't have spoons in the bakery...

She decided it must have come from upstairs, because they lived above the bakery...

The trisome decided to forget the incident and Joe fially got his knife... Er, I mean fork...

...

A little while later, Casper thought of something:

“Mary?”

“Yes?” she replied.

“Your sisters all got dresses in the shade of blue they're called after, and your mother has all shades in her dress, and you are called Blue. Where's your blue dress?”

Casper was right: from top to bottom Mary's clothes were a sunny yellow, and they were certainly not part of a dress...

At that moment, Seara, Mary's mom, had come up to the table and remarked:

“Yes Marina, why don't you put on your dress again? Since you left to become a Pokémon trainer, things have changed a lot...”

“Mom, please...”

“Ok, but what about our customers? Since you left, a lot of the boys stopped coming here...”

Mary blushed at that remark and quickly grabbed a mirror out of thin air to hide her face...


“Well at least you still use her magician training you ended when you're left.”

Mary became even more red, but luckily, but luckily nobody saw it because of the mirror, except she herself...

To quickly escape from more embarrassing revelations, Mary told her mother she had to show Casper (and Joe) the town, so they should hurry up now...

Seara sighed, but she let them go...


Back outside...


“So when will we see that dress, Marina?” Joe asked teasingly.

“Do you want to see something Joe? What about a nice big pan?” Mary threatened.

“Oh oh, I'm out of here!” Joe said before running off.

“Come back you little pervert!” Mary shouted, before she ran after him.

Casper sighed again at the always meddling twosome, when his dad said:

“Casper, quickly...”

“Gah! Is this going to be a regular thing with you?!” Casper gasped.

(Ratatouille quote)

“Just quickly go into the forest or something!” his dad ordered.

“Fine!”


In the forest...


“Now what is it that you have interrupt me while I'm with... Never mind...”

“If you just listen to me for a sec then I'll explain! Look, you know that incident with the forks?”

“Yes?” Casper asked slowly...

“Well, it's part of your new... Powers...”

“I've got powers? Cool!”

“Yes yes. It was caused by the close exposure to the power of the Game Pack. Apparently, not only you and I were hit hard, but also your mother, seeing that she immediately got power over Team Revenge and she got a powerful Pokémon right away...”

“Wait... You got powers too?!”

“Of course! Do you think powerful Flygons come falling from the sky like rain?”

“Well... It rains a lot down here...”

“Never mind... Although I was closer to the Game Pack then your mother, I still need your powers to defeat her, seeing as she rounded up an army of Revenge grunts and Game Shark Pokémon...”

“Ok, so what can I do?”

“First, you have to control you powers and learn to use them... Wait, I've got an idea...”


Suddenly, out of nowhere, a mysterious portal appeared that reminded Casper of the flash that had started all of this...

Casper's dad told him to go through it, and so he did...

Closing his eyes, he was sucked in by the vortex.... Spinning around, he eventually landed on a hard, smooth surface...

Even before he had opened his eyes or his ears functioned again, he knew where he had been teleported to...

“Atscha!” Casper sneezed because of alarge amount of dust...

Casper opened his eyes to be sure; he was back where everything started: the old dusty basement...

“Good afternoon, did you have a pleasant trip?” Casper's dad asked.

“Urgh...” Casper replied, getting up while dusting off his clothes...

“Ah, I see you liked it. Now can we start with our training?” Casper's dad asked gniffling...

“You can cut it out ok, Dad? Hey, that reminds me...”

“What is it, we haven't got all day you know...”
“What's your name?” Casper asked.

“My name? What do you need it for?”

“Well, the readers got to know Mary's mom name (Seara) and my mom's name (Layla), but what is your name?”

“My name... Right...”

“You don't remember?!”

Well, it's just that... The writer never gave me one!”

-Short intermezzo-

Whoops, kinda missed that one! Ehm... Now how will I solve this... I know!

*clears throat*

Attention readers!

For the one who can find a suitable name for Casper's dad, I offer the new chapters sent to him/her one day before officially posting it here!

This same reward is for who guesses where I really live! The clues are Twerpan City,Gumbeli, and other cities mentioned in my story!

If someone were to find both the name and where I really live, that person will get the new chapters 2 or 3 days earlier (!), depending on how well that person solved the two problems...

Good luck!

-End of first intermezzo- (reference to 'The discovery of heaven' by Harry Mulisch)

“Well, I guess that's taken care of. Shall we begin?” Casper asked.

“Ok, first you have to understand what you can do; You can create things, change things and erase things, and probably a lot more I don't remember right now...”

“Right...”

In the mean while, Mary and Joe had called a truce, and now walked through the village of Nastwood...

Mary pointed out many wonderful things: the forest that surrounded the village and also went through it, the many castles, from long forgotten battles and ages, an old woman that wanted to cross a very busy road...

An old woman that wanted to cross a very busy road?!?!?!

Heroically as Joe was, or just because he wanted to show off in front of Mary, he dashed towards the old lady...

He forcefully offered his help, but the old lady refused, and before Joe could comprehend it, the old lady had made three somersaults over the road and safely walked into a store....

While Joe was still blinking at what just happened, hoping it was a dream and he would soon wake up, Mary caught up with him...

“How... She... Somersault... Chocolate cookies!” Joe exclaimed uttering.

“(sighs) I told you, in Nastwood everyone's a half acrobat...” she said.

“But... Old lady... How...” Joe uttered before fainting and landing on the hard pavement...

But even that didn't wake him up, neither did Mary's attempts do the trick...



In the mean while, Casper had mastered a little of his abilities, being able to create portals like his dad, and changing rubbish into useful objects...


Now that he had studied the basics, he should put it to the test by warping back to Nastwood and use them for what he thinks is important for the mission...

...


After saying goodbye to his dad, Casper warped back to the piece of the forest he had gone too earlier...

But he couldn't see Mary and Joe anywhere...

Even when he stepped out of the woods, he couldn't find them...

I guess I better go look for them then...

Soon Casper found the twosome, with Joe still being passed out and Mary holding his head still trying to get him to snap out of it...

As soon as Mary caught sight of Casper, she quickly rushed to him, dropping Joe's head on the pavement hard.

“Finally you're here! Joe has been unconscious for more than an hour and I can't wake him up!” she said.

“What made him faint (like a wuss) in the first place?” Casper asked.

“Er... An old lady doing three somersaults over a very busy road and then landing safely?”

“No seriously... Wait, you aren't joking right?”

“Eh no... I told him so that everyone in Nastwood...”


Casper fainted because of the strange story! Evil old lady gained 500 experience points!

Evil old lady went to level 45!

What?

Evil old lady is evolving!

*bling bling bling...*

Congratulations! Your Evil old lady evolved into Malevolent ancient chick!

Malevolent ancient chick would like to learn Fire Blast, which she did, although she already knows 42 different attacks!


...


“Well, that was certainly weird,” Mary concluded.

...

“Hey, wait a minute! Now those two are out again! What am I gonna do now?”

“I know something...” A strange voice said...

“What... Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!”

...

...

...

A trisome of little whiles later...

“Ow my head hurts like it was hit by a giant déjà-vu...” Joe said.

“Ugh... Hey, how do you even know that word?” Casper wanted to know...

“Um... Unternet?” Joe replied. (Fairy Oddparents Quote)

“Never mind... Hey, where did Mary go?”

“I've been asking myself that same question,” Joe said (pseudo) wisely.

“Uh... No you didn't,” Casper remarked.

“Yes I did.”

“No.”

“Yes.”

“True.”

“False.”

“Right.”

“Wrong.”

“Battle?” Casper asked.

“Yeah!” Joe replied.


And so it was decided: Casper and Joe wrestled with each other, while rolling over the ground and screaming like crazy people.


(Mary: Hey, that was our thing!)


After this short not-making-any-sense-part, Casper and Joe decided to look for Mary...

But the fate wasn't very friendly, because wherever they looked, whomever they asked if they saw her, they didn't find her and the villagers hadn't seen a thing...

To rest for a while and eat (and to see Mary's hot mom Seara) Joe suggested to go back to the Cup-cake bakery....

They were in for a big surprise...

Because when they walked into the bakery, who did they saw standing behind the counter?

And now... Commercials!

A hord of mutant zombies comes around the corner... What will the hero do now?!

Maybe... Sing a song?

'Jigelypuff (Name of Jigglypuff adjusted so the song cen be sang right), Jige-ly-y-y-puff...

Jigelypuff, Jigely-y-y-y-y-y-y...

And so, with his awesome Jiggle-Mike the hero let the hord of mutant zombies fall to sleep so he could slay them with water (because of the mutation they became immune to fire, but feared water instead).

Now how can you get such a terrific microphone? Very simple!

Just call 555-TOMATOJUICE to receive a free ticket costing 1 zillion dollars.

This ticket is used to go to Faraway Island, where you have to catch Mew.

Ask all your friends to do the same and then feed 49 Mews to Heatran.

He will make the Mews into zombies and then... Ehm... Run!

And that's how wait...

To get a Jiggle-Mike to defeat the evil Mewtant zombies, you just so stupidly created, you just have to call 555-BANANASPLIT to receive it.

You have to pay 2 zillion dollars before they give it to you

And that's all there is to defeat mutant... Wait, how did that spelling error get there?!

We need to know how to defeat mutant zombies!

-End of commercials-

As I was saying, when they walked into the bakery, they saw Mary standing behind the counter!

Not only that, she was also serving the customers in a lovely dark blue dress!

(picture coming later)

At the sight of her, the two boys laughed and couldn't stop it even when Mary became red with embarrassment!

Later, when Seara and her 4 other daughters closed the bakery, the trisome of Casper, Joe and lovely dressed up Marina (ah ah, don't hit me Marina, your mom is still in the room) sat around the table to talk...

Apparently Marina's mom had enough of it that her oldest daughter still hadn't found a boyfriend, so she had put her back in the family business, since she may still do that because she is 15 years old, in hopes of Marina finding a suitable boyfriend between the male customers that, once again, were flooding to the bakery after they heard she was back.

So far, however, Marina had waved off any avances from them...

Mary was near breaking point, so she told, and would probably have to stay here and work until she found someone she could boss around enough so she could travel where she wanted...

Then, Casper had an idea...

“Ehm... Misse Blue...” he said.

“Miss Blue. And call me Seara. Yes?” Seara said.

“Ehm ok... Miss Seara Blue...”

“Just Seara please.”

Yes... Seara, could Marina travel with me (and Joe) to Mortanry please?”

“But she has a lot of work to do here and has to find a suitable boyfriend...”

“But she already has one,” Casper lied.

“Oh yes? I didn't know that. Marina didn't say anything about it, but...” Seara said,

“Marina, is this true?”

Marina nodded, going along with Casper's plan...

“Oh? Ok, go along then you two...

(Joe: Hey!)

And have a fine trip!”



...



After the town had waved the trisome out, especially the boys, the three schemers went on their way to Mortanry...

“That was briljant, thank you so much!” Mary praised Casper.

“Thanks, but ehm...” Casper said, while tapping on his cheek...

“Oh ok, here you go,” Mary said and gave Casper a little kiss on the cheek.

“Hey and what about me? I helped too!” Joe complained.

Casper and Mary (I have to be careful now, since her mother isn't around anymore) ignored the annoying little helper and went on ahead to Mortanry, that lied close to Twerpan City...


Joe thought about things for a while...

Mmm... Alone in my little thinking box... No one to bother me...

Well hey Joe!

Hello João (not him again)

I heard that! Anyway I was riding on the roller coaster this morning, when I saw a strange guy... He was looking at me, and talking to me... I think, he was coming on to me! I think he might have thought that I. Was sexy...

Mhmh... So? What do I care, mh?

Jeeze Joe, you don't have to get all defensive...

I'm not getting DEFENSIVE! Anyway, what do I care about some sexy guy you met on the rollercoaster, I am trying to read...

Ok, but just so you know... If you were sexy...

“Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! They're messing with my head, and it's not fair! Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!”


Joe became nuts because of João's mind games and started to yell and scream and eat vegetables (?).

After that, he jumped into the river and swam further like a madman (well, actually he just
is a madman), trying to escape the (imaginary) voices in his head...

Because of that, he quickly caught up with Casper and Mary, who were talking about Mortanry...

When he was close enough, he crawled out of the water...

Soaked as something that's mad... And soaked he followed the two like nothing had happened...


-Second short intermezzo-

“João, I told you a million times that you mustn't play mind games with the characters,” I told my youngest little brother...

“And I told you not to parody the song 'If you were g a y' from the musical Avenue Q in any way!” Tim went on.

“But, I had a song in my heart,” João complained.

(Unaccompanied minors quote)

Tim and I looked at our youngest brother like he is some crazy weirdo, what he is of course...

“I heard that!!!” João said.

Suddenly he grabbed a chainsaw!

Wait... We have to get out of here!!!


And so my two older brothers ran away from my toy chainsaw I wanted to play with...

The end...

For now...

On the road to Viridian City,

I'm on the road, I'm on the road...

On the road to Viridian City!

I'm on the road to become the greatest trainer, trainer,

And I-I-I-I-I-I won't quit until I'm number one...

Gonna be the one, one... Gonna be the one...

We'll keep on trying, trying,

Then, we try some more,

we'll stay together and find a place worth fighting foooooor, fooooooooooor!

I'm on the road...

On the road to Viridian City... City!

I've got a badge and the pooower to play!

... etc.

<SS out>

This post has been edited by Scriptor Scorpio: May 3 2009, 07:02 AM

[Xanadu View Member Profile]

I'll have to steal nya's line... Did you have grand plans for finishing this sentece?

Casper and Joe were about to send out their Pokémon, when someone called Mary 'big sister'.

In one part of the chapter, your writing didn't italicise, you typed the second part of the code wrong, I think. Maybe you should just use the icon to italicise it, it's much easier.

[Scriptor Scorpio View Member Profile]

I'll have to steal nya's line... Did you have grand plans for finishing this sentece?

Casper and Joe were about to send out their Pokémon, when someone called Mary 'big sister'.

In one part of the chapter, your writing didn't italicise, you typed the second part of the code wrong, I think. Maybe you should just use the icon to italicise it, it's much easier.

No, not really.

The situation was like Casper and Joe thought Mary was being attacked by blue monsters or something, and they were very close to sending out their Pokémon to help her, when someone called Mary her big sister, which had to mean the blue monsters were Mary's family, so Casper and Joe ended up putting their Pokéballs back in their pockets...

And,
I fixed the italics.

So,
What do you think of the new chapter?

[Xanadu View Member Profile]

I think it was pretty good, lots of random humor. I noticed that it has become much funnier since the beginning of the story, in my opinion.

I think he might have thought that I. Was sexy...

Extra period in that line. I think.

[Scriptor Scorpio View Member Profile]

I think it was pretty good, lots of random humor. I noticed that it has become much funnier since the beginning of the story, in my opinion.

I think he might have thought that I. Was sexy...

Extra period in that line. I think.

Thanks.

When I started the story, I wanted to go for the epic story,

but comedy seems to go as well...

EDIT: I found out how that line was formed...

Originally I took it from Avenue Q with g and a and y,

but the word filter changed it into sexy,

and so:

I. Was sexy.

This post has been edited by Scriptor Scorpio: Aug 19 2008, 07:15 AM

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With this post I put this back up on the list>>>

(more importantly, the first page)

Hopefully,

someone will reply...

I apologize that there haven't been new chapters,

but I'm working until September first at my job,

and after that I'll have to work over time to finish my big project...

Now featuring at the first post:
Chapter information.

And from now on,
also the moves, abilities and hold items (coming soon) for every Pokémon.

Casper

(Slug) Lv. 16 Hold Item: Expert Belt->Slightly raises power of Super Effective moves
Storm Drain

Mud-Slap
Water Pulse
Mud Bomb
Hidden Power

(Nick) Lv. 15 Hold Item: King's Rock-> May cause opponent to Flinch
Intimidate

Tackle
Quick Attack
Wing Attack
Steel Wing

(Deke) Lv. 15 Hold Item: Metal Coat-> Any Steel-type move's power is increased by 10%
Keen Eye

Steel Wing
Peck
Fury Attack
Pursuit

(Lee) Lv. 16 Hold Item: Magnet-> Any Electric-type move's power is increased by 10%
Static

Charge beam
Thundershock
Low kick
Swift

Joe

Lv. 16 Hold Item: Muscle band-> Slightly raises power of Physical moves
Quick Feet

Tackle
Howl
Sand-Attack
Bite

Lv. 15 Hold Item: Leftovers-> HP Increases by 1/16th each turn
Unaware

Tackle
Defense Curl
Rollout
Water Gun

Lv. 16 Hold Item: Flame Plate-> Raises power of Fire moves
Flame Body

Smog
Ember
Smokescreen
Faint Attack

Lv. 17 Hold Item: Razor Fang-> Raises chance of causing the foe to Flinch
Shield Dust

Tackle
Confusion
Gust
Protect

Mary

Lv. 10 Hold Item: Mystic Water-> Any Water-type move's power is increased by 10%
Tackle
Defense Curl
Tail Whip
Water Gun

Lv. 9 Hold Item: Miracle Seed-> Any Grass-type move's power is increased by 10%
Chlorophyll

Absorb
Sweet Scent
Acid

Lv. 9 Hold Item: Sharp Beak-> Any Flying-type move's power is increased by 10%
Guts

Growl
Peck
Focus Energy
Quick Attack

Lv. 9 Hold Item: Zap Plate-> Raises power of Electric moves
Pickup

Growl
Bide
Quick Attack
Charm

With special thanks to serebii.net for the info

Anything else?

Guys??

Hello???

This post has been edited by Scriptor Scorpio: Dec 16 2008, 04:47 AM

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I'll add the hold items to the above post,

while putting this back

on the first page of the Pokéfanfic forum,

and,

Joe and Casper are now viewable as sprites in the first post...

P.S.: I'm very happy with the large amount of views,

but why isn't anybody posting???!!!

[Scriptor Scorpio View Member Profile]

Without further ado,

I present to you,

Chapter 13!

Part 13: Everything's a mis(s)!


“Mary...” Casper said.

“Oh Casper!” Mary responded.

“Mary.”

“Casper.”

“Mary.”

“Casper...”

“Oh my Mary!”

“Caaasperrr...”

“Maaaaarrry-y-y-y-y-y...”

...

“Can someone just tell me who took my peanut butter sandwich?!” Joe exclaimed.

“Casper...” Mary claimed.

“Mary...” Casper responded yet again.

“Oh Casper!”

(Mary again)

“Mary... Hey wait! Do you know which chapter this is?!” Casper suddenly said.

“No...” Joe and Mary said together...

(Casper: Now why did you put that 'together' there?! Anyway...)

“It's the 13th!!!” Casper screamed in agony.

“So?” Mary said, showing little pity.

“Don't you know what that means?” Casper exclaimed desperately.

“No...” Joe went along with the no-pity-showing, and the rhyming!

“It means all kinds of weird things will happen, like me saying 'Hey Marina, I like big butts and I cannot lie, we other...'” Casper uttered before being hit by something...

Then the following message is shown:

You were hit by a pan, Marina's pan!

(Wait don't hit me, this is good stuff...

Brothers: Very modest... *cough cough*

Me: Yeah yeah, now continuing the message...)

Aka you got marina-ted!

Some weird goo is dripping from Casper's ears...

No wait, that's not sauce, that's ear wax! Eeeew...

“I think that's the weird thing he said that would happen,” Joe decided.

“So what, he said I had a big butt, and called me Marina!” Mary said.

“Well... 'You do have a big butt...' Oh oh...” Joe said.

You got hit by a pan! Marina's pan!

...

You got marina-ted!

Mary kicks butt! ... In this case Joe's butt...

“And they say I have a big butt, ha! ... Are we going to do the rest of the chapter with me?” Mary said.

Well, erm...

“Maybe we can turn this into a one-woman show...” she said, and then turns the 'stage' into a fluffy, cuddly room (Urgh! Women now also control my story?!)

“I already hired a director and a cameraman!” Mary said, while throwing her hair back...

“I'm ready for my close-up!”

(That's it! I have enough of this! Mmm... Gotta shut this diva down... Wait, I have an idea!)

“Yes ready for the close-up? Go stand a little bit farther... Farther... Farther... Faaarther... That's it!”

A barred door closes the box Marina unknowinly stepped into...

“Hey! Let me out of here you numnut that called me Marina!” Marina said.

(Muhaha, now I'm finally the boss of my own story! Finally! ... That didn't sound so powerful as it should be...)


Casper and Joe come too...

“Urgh... What happened?” Casper asked.

Joe checks the bruise on his forehead...

“We were hit by her magical pan, and you squirted out some ear wax while you were unconscious...” Joe decided.

“Eeeew!” boxed-up Marina said.

“Hehe, this could be fun...” Joe realized...

“Oh oh...” Casper said.

Joe starts poking Marina with a stick...

“Ah! Ow! Joe, cut it out!” Marina exclaimed.

“Maybe you should stop Joe...” Casper advised.

“Are you kidding me? This is fun!” Joe replied.

“Yeah, but what do you think she will do when she comes out of there?” Casper asked.

“If she comes out...” Joe said with a grin.

“Why you...” Marina began and rambled around with her cage,

“and I'll get you as well for all this!”

(Owww... Didn't really think of that... Run guys run!)

“What are you talking about,” Joe said,

“she's never gonna get out of... Yes?”

Marina had asked for something...

“Ey. Pssst. If you get me out of here, I'll give you...” Marina whispered in Joe's ear.

“By golly! That's totally worth it!” Joe exclaimed.

“What did she say to you?!” Casper wanted to know, a bit jealous...

“Ehm... Ice cream...” Joe said.

(Yeah... Right... Wait, don't open the...)

The barred door fell to Bibarel's Head-Butt...

“Thank you very much!” Mary exclaimed and put Joe in the box instead and fixed the barred door back in the henches with her strong arms...

“Hey! What about...” Joe uttered.

“Hehe, later Joe...” Mary gniffled.

“Mary? Why-y-y-y-y???” Joe sniffled.

“And now for you two...” Mary said with a dark tone.

(0_Ooh (lol))

Come here you wimsy writer!” Mary yelled as a kind of war cry.

“Gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! Even here the women control me, or at least hunt me, and not in a pleasant way!” I exclaimed before running away for Mary's fit of rage...

“Well this certainly is going to be a pleasant chapter...” Casper concluded...

“Yep...” Joe said, a bit sad.

“Gah! Are you still here?!” Casper said.

“Duh! I'm in a box...” Joe said like Casper was the dumb one of the two...

The writer finally returns to his nice, warm, comfy, and above all, safe seat to continue this very, very special chapter... (and opens up Joe's box, and Joe doesn't say a word, in case Mary pulls out her magical pan again...)

“Now what has he got in store for us? A nice blizzard? A scaling inferno? A thunderstorm?” Casper asked,

“Why? Why are you doing this?”

“I'd normally say 'because I like it', but now... Shut it!” I said, with the I of the Ilmighty, the I of Imperor, the I of the storm! Muhahaha! Ehem, erm...

“Why? Is there an avalanche danger?” Casper sarcastically asked.

“Kinda,” I said.

“Whaza?! For real!” Casper screamed, once again in agony...

And then... Mary jumped on top of him!

“Aaaah! Don't hurt me! Gaaaah!” Casper exclaimed like a little baby...

“Hey!” Mary (?) said.

“Whaza?” Casper couldn't believe his ears.

“Hey, you called me Marina,” Mary said.

“Eh, yes...” Casper gulped.

“Said you like my big butt...” Mary said menacingly...

“Er... Ok...” Casper gulped again, not liking where this was going. At all.

“And... You wanted Joe to stop poking me. That's the nicest thing someone else has ever done for me! Well, except saving me, a boy from Nastwood buying me bonbons, a girlfriend of mine giving me flowers, an old guy saying I was smart,...” Mary summed up, displaying a very disturbing pattern...

“Er, ok ok, I get it, so erm... But what has that to do with...” Casper began.

But before he knew it, the girl lying on top of him gave him five big kisses on his cheecks, which made him kinda blush...

(Sorry guys, we have to keep these Pokémon fanfics clean...)

“Err... Wow, thanks,” Casper could utter.

“You're welcome! Now, what way should we go to get to Mortanry” Mary said, only getting up from Casper a little later...

“Well eh...” Casper began while getting up and getting his map,

“if we go north just a bit, we should arrive...” Casper concluded.

“Great! Let's go!” Mary cheerfully said.

One minute she's all fiery, the next one she's all thankful, and another one after that she's back to her cheery, traveling ways... What a fascinating woman! ... Hey are you displaying my thoughts?! Nooooooooooooooooo!!!

(Hehe, no secret of you will remain hidden... Muhahaha!)

“Why you...” Casper began.

“Look, there it is!” Mary suddenly shouted.

She was right; a few hundred meters ahead,

Mortanry loomed in the light of the early afternoon...

“Finally we made it!” Mary said smiling.

“Yes... Indeed...” Casper said silently.

Like Twerpan city was the port town of Gumbeli, Mortanry was the mining town of the area...

(mind you that this is all based on real cities and places... Most of it anyway...)

“Now what should we do now?” Mary asked.

Suddenly a shadow popped up behind Mary, who was ignorant to the impending danger...

This also made Joe open his big mouth up again...

“Ma-ma-ma-ma-ma-mary!” He uttered in distress.

“What, do you still want that...” Mary said and glanced quickly at Casper,

“Ehm... Cookie? You know it was just a trick to get out...”

“B-b-b-b-b-b-but...” he stuttered.

“Behind you!” Casper yelled out.

“What?” Mary turned around.

A dark creature grinned at her.

“Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!” she yelled.

The screech was so loud and high that it made Casper and Joe's ears pop and made them shut their ears quickly, but it also...

Scurried away the terrified Misdreavus I sent to scare the hillbillies out of them!

Gah! My masterplan failed!

“Wait a minute! You sent those misfortunes and made us shout out those random sentences that got Joe...”Casper began.

“Us...” Joe remarked.

“Whatever. His butt kicked by Mary?!” Casper shouted.

“Ehm, well, erm, yes ehem...” I stuttered.
“Get him!”

There came Mary again with her warcry...

Wait... 0_Oooh, I gotta get out of here! (yet again)

Gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!

Thank you and good night!

Or morning, or noon, or something like that...

Bye!

“Hey wait, We've still got six and a half pages to go!” Casper said.

“B-b-but, she scares me...” I said while pointing my finger at Mary.

“You're afraid of your own character? That is kinda...” Joe began, but wrenched up his mouth before he could continue...

“You see? You can control Joe, but not Mary? Come on, be a man, show 'em who's boss!” Casper said.

Three seconds later...

“Thank you soooooooooooo much for saying that Casper...” Joe sarcastically remarked.

“Grrr... I'll get you for this!” Mary said.

Mary, Casper and Joe were dangling from a wheel that kept going round and round...

And round and round and round and round and round and round and round and round,
and round and round and round and round and round and round and round and round,
and round and round and round and round and round and round and round and round,
and round and round and round and round and round and round and round and round,
and round and round and round and round and round and round and round and round,
and round and round and round and round and round and round and round and round,
and round and round and round and round and round and round and round and round,
and round and round and round and round and round and round and round and round,
and round and round and round and round and round and round and round and round...

“João, cut that out!” I ordered to my youngest brother who apparently likes spinning wheels...
A lot...


Now,
back to the story...


“Ehm... Maybe that 'taking control' was a bad idea... Maybe you should let Mary handle everything again...” Casper suggested.

“If you're a good boy, I'll arrange a date for you with her...” I said...

“Deal!” Casper said, before realizing,

“Wait, now she knows...”

“You... Like me?” Mary finished.

“You'd promise you wouldn't tell!” Casper sniffled.

“Technically, you said it...” Joe rectified...

“Oh... Well, fix this!” Casper said.

“And what about the date?” I reminded him.

“To **** with it, I want free romance, wimsy writer!” Casper shouted.

“Great, now I have to erase all this, because you sweared!” I said, and pushed after that the button to erase the memory of the three of all the romance revealing, swearing, switching of who's boss, and all that...

“So now, it cannot be reversed?” Casper asked.

“No... In twenty-two seconds, all the story-messing up data will be forgotten by us four,” I said.

“Good, because there's two things: one; I didn't really swear, two: Mary is the boss again!” Casper laughed.

“Whatte?! You son of a...” I began.

“Hot mom! 9,8...” Joe said.

“Whaza?! You think my mom's hot?!” Casper said.

“4,3,2,1... 0!” Joe yelled.

A flash of mauve (?) light blinded us and the readers...

A stroke of lightning erased all the crucial parts of the plotline that had been revealed too early...

...

Ugh... What happened?

Must be the decaf... Anyway...

The trisome woke up in the Pokécenter after Casper found out young and adventurous Joe had visited the 23 daughters of the local hotel owners...

After a nice morning concerto of yawning, with the high alts of Mary and Joe (?) finishing it,
the trisome went downstairs to get some breakfast...

Unfortunately,

they were greeted by a not-so-friendly nurse...

“Hey, where's Nurse Joy?” Casper asked.

“Hmph! Nurse Joy?! This isn't the anime kid. I'm Nurse Jennifer!” Nurse Jennifer grunted.

The chunky nurse had sleep sacks that dropped to her jaw and nose hair to her chin... Casper was doubting about how healthy the food would be...

Even if there wasn't rat poison done in by the cranky nurse, there might have been dropped in a little something something to make everyone right at home... A very personal little something something, if you know what I mean...

Casper decided it was worth the try to do something about this and concentrated...

Amber hair... Nice and naughty face... Ideal torso with good big other somethings somethings... Smashing looks and sexy nurse outfit.... A tan, tasteful, tempting, thick (or thin? I'm not sure...) thighs, thoughtful, tigress, etc. Oelalalalalala, no ugly nurse anymore, no cranky or chunky nurse,....

Bam! Now nurse Jennifer was no longer Jennifer the Grumpy, but...

“Hello, I'm Nurse Jennifer Aniston, how can I help you?” the new Nurse Jennifer asked.

(Did you notice the A,N,I,S,T,O,N thingy?)

*applause* Yes yes, thank you....

*applause stops* Wait, you just applaused for her?!

*audience remains silent* Oh I get it... Anyway,

I consider a bit of that applause also for me,

*audience begins booh-ing* Shut it!

*mean looks from the audience* Erm...

“Mmm... Tough crowd...” Joe suddenly said.

“Who? What? ... Stop popping up like that!” I yelled before kicking Joe off my stage and back in the Pokécenter.

Now anyway...

“Hey everybody!” Mary said, also suddenly popping up out of nowhere.

“Whatte?!” I could only utter.

*big applause from audience*

“Thank you, you're too kind...” Mary replied.

“That's it! This is my story!” I began.

“Well actually, this is Casper's story and I'm control of it...” Mary corrected.

“Yeah! Wait, whaza?!” Casper said, also popping up on stage.

“Chaos control!” I yelled, exhausted from the whole popping-up craze...

It was really hard for me to get Jennifer Anniston for my story, since she's very famous,
and doesn't take on guest appearances that easily. Luckily I was able to get her here
thanks to a lot of work and well, ehem... Because I can write whoever I want actually, without getting sued...

“Guards! Attorneys! Policemen! Get him! I didn't sign in for this!” our suddenly not-so-lovely-anymore guest yelled...

Wait... Run!

...

15 minutes later...

“So you will appear in 'The Game Pack'?” I asked Jennifer.
“Sure honey!” she replied.
“I'm glad we cleared that out... Now back to the story!” I said and put everyone back in...

In the mean while, because of the Chaos Control, no time seems to have past during the whole explanation about our hot guest star...

“Hello, I'm Nurse Jennifer Aniston, how can I help you?” the new Nurse Jennifer asked.

(I did a little rewinding even)

“Well, there is one thing...” Joe said...

15 seconds later...

The trisome has been thrown onto the street...

“Well, that was certainly quick...” Joe remarked.

“Great! Now we got kicked out of here as well, thanks to you!” Mary yelled.

“I'm innocent! I mean, do continue...” Casper corrected himself.

“Anyway... Joe, you numnut!” Mary yelled yet again.

“Whaaaaat, I was young and adventurous...” Joe said in his defense.

“It happened 15 seconds ago and you're still young and adventurous!” Mary exclaimed.

“I am, aren't I?” Joe replied with a wink at Mary.

Say it with me boys and girls:

You got hit by a pan! Marina's pan!

...

You got marina-ted!

now that problem's solved...

“Hey! I'm not unconscious!” Joe shouted happily.

“Yet,” Mary said before hitting him again with her pan.

“Nope, nothing! I must be immune!” Joe said.

While Mary tried to knock-out Joe with her magical pan,

Casper said:

“Yeah probably, after all those times!”

(Flashback)

“What’s that?” Casper asked.

It’s Nastwood, a tiny village with lots of beautiful castles and…” Mary began…

“No, I mean that red thingy…” Casper said, while pointing at a red thingy…

“That’s… Wait a minute, that’s just ketchup!” Mary complained,

“Joe!”


Joe, although still a bit sleepy, got up when he realised someone called, and asked:

“What is it?”

“Have you touched my…” Mary began…

(Again)

“Please don’t hurt me, I’ll never do it again!” Joe uttered,

“Don’t take out your pan please!”

“What are you talk…” Mary began…

(Again, again)

Then she put her hand on her chest and ‘remembered’ a ticklish feeling from the other night…

“Come here you, so I can bake omelets of your quadruple egg head,” she yelled, while running after the little pervert…

(Second one)

A little while later, Casper thought of something:

“Mary?”

“Yes?” she replied.

“Your sisters all got dresses in the shade of blue they're called after, and your mother has all shades in her dress, and you are called Blue. Where's your blue dress?”

Casper was right: from top to bottom Mary's clothes were a sunny yellow, and they were certainly not part of a dress...

At that moment, Seara, Mary's mom, had come up to the table and remarked:

“Yes Marina, why don't you put on your dress again? Since you left to become a Pokémon trainer, things have changed a lot...”

“Mom, please...”

“Ok, but what about our customers? Since you left, a lot of the boys stopped coming here...”

Mary blushed at that remark and quickly grabbed a mirror out of thin air to hide her face...


“Well at least you still use your magician training you ended when you're left.”

Mary became even more red, but luckily, but luckily nobody saw it because of the mirror, except she herself...

To quickly escape from more embarrassing revelations, Mary told her mother she had to show Casper (and Joe) the town, so they should hurry up now...

Seara sighed, but she let them go...


Back outside...


“So when will we see that dress, Marina?” Joe asked teasingly.

“Do you want to see something Joe? What about a nice big pan?” Mary threatened.

“Oh oh, I'm outa here!” Joe said before running off.

“Come back you little pervert!” Mary shouted, before she ran after him.

(End of flashbacks)

The other two are in this chapter so... Normal people should still remember them...

“Wow, that were two big flashbaks...” Joe remarked.

“Yeah... Anyway... What happened with the nurse actually?” Casper asked.

“Nothing bad...” Joe lied.

“Well it must have been something she didn't like because she kicked us out!” Casper yelled.

“She'll be back...” Joe said confidently...

...



Will Jennifer ever get back to Joe(y)?
Will Joe ever get his peanut butter sandwich back?
Will Joe ever realise girls don't react very well to his ways of flirtation?
Will Joe ever know what's right for him?
Will Joe ever be quiet?
Will Joe ever get a girlfriend?

“Hey, quit talking about me! Wow... That's a first...” Joe remarked.

Ok then...

Will Mary ever knock-out Joe with a pan again?
Will Casper ever tell Mary...

“Stop! Hit it Mary!” Casper shouted, after which Mary knocked me out...

...

“Will the writer ever take control of his own story?” Mary said.

Wait for it to never come,

in the next, 14th chapter!

“Bye!” Mary, Casper and Joe said.

“Hey! Why do I have to be last?!” Joe whined and suddenly felt the urge to say:

“Hey, is that awesome hot Mary writing the story now instead of that wimsy writer that put two boys in first as the main characters... Yes, she is...”

“Bye!” q-t (=cutey) Casper said, “Whaza?! Eh... Thanks?

“You're welcome (written by Mary Blue)

To be continued...

[Xanadu View Member Profile]

You go Mary! Nobody should ever have to wear a dress D< Ever. And I'm now going to emulate my idol (Mary) and beat everybody up who annoys me with a pan, unfortunately Marin-ated, sounds a lot better than Jer-inated... And Jer-inated can't even be used as a joke. And kill Joe is my new goal D<

Anywho, nice chapter, I read it a while ago but was too lazy to review, and when ever I did I'd accidentally delete all my writing and took it as an omen excuse to postpone my reviews. I was really in this chapter, I don't know how it was different from others, but it was!

[Scriptor Scorpio View Member Profile]

You go Mary! Nobody should ever have to wear a dress D< Ever. And I'm now going to emulate my idol (Mary) and beat everybody up who annoys me with a pan, unfortunately Marin-ated, sounds a lot better than Jer-inated... And Jer-inated can't even be used as a joke. And kill Joe is my new goal D<

Anywho, nice chapter, I read it a while ago but was too lazy to review, and when ever I did I'd accidentally delete all my writing and took it as an omen excuse to postpone my reviews. I was really in this chapter, I don't know how it was different from others, but it was!

That's all I needed to hear...

Part 14 (not) coming soon!!!

[Scriptor Scorpio View Member Profile]

A man's gotta do what a man's gotta do...

...

*flushes*

Ah, that feels much better...

Oh, forgot something...

*puts this topic back up with this reply, so people notice his fanfic*

I will post a new chapter as soon as I get one or more comments on the story.

Deal?

Ok! I'll get workin' on it!

Waaaait a minute! Nobody commented!

Strike! Strike! Strike!

lol

But seriously,

comment!