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Tales of Pocket Monsters- featuring The Game Pack
I wish I'd never asked for a gameboy...)


Hello,
this is a topic where anyone can post their stories, with permission of course...
Well, I'll give the good example and put one...

The Game Pack- I wish I'd never asked for a gameboy...

Characters:
- Joe:


without hat:


Credit to alicat

- Casper


Credit to Scarlet

Chapter information:
1. I wish I'd never asked for a gameboy...
423 words

2. Pixel dudes!
398 words

3. The close call
416 words

4. This world...
578 words

5.The annoying little helper
956 words

6. Battles and chicks
1227 words

7. Are we there yet? Are we there yet? Are we there yet? Are we there yet?
1232 words

8. Breaking walls... And heads as well!
1146 words

9. The mustache
1421 words

10. Anniversary/adversary
1575 words

11. Nasty!
2261 words

12. Back up and running!
3018 words

13. Everything's a mis(s)!
3336 words

14. The secret art of...
4004 words

(More will be added...)

Poll above...

This post has been edited by Scriptor Scorpio: Jun 25 2010, 10:41 AM

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Beware, this is 19 scrolls long.


The Game Pack
Part 1: I wish I'd never asked for a gameboy...

Totally revised! Read now!

"Why do I always have to go to get the water bottles?" wined Casper.


A 15 year old boy named Casper (obviously)was complaining, like always, about him being always the one that had to

'Go get the water bottles'

And he didn't like it,

At all.

Certainly not when he was playing

'STAR WARS TRILOGY'

On his brand new gameboy advance SP.

He didn't have much of a choice,

So he went down the stairs, into the basement, wining and complaining as he went about what kind of mother would send his son into a dusty basement.

The basement was not so different or special from other basements, if you don't notice the dust, and if you don’t count:

-The endless row of empty bottles that fill most of the shelves, thus making them a bit useless...

-The pieces of wood that come falling down, every time you move, from the rotten roof aka the living room floor...

-And some old roof plates, for possible, future use…

(So Casper's dad said)

When he was about to pick up one of the bottles from the boxes that were piled up against the wall,
He suddenly saw something shining under a pile of dust…
He blew the dirt away, which formed a huge cloud in the cramped space…

A few coughs and sneezes later,

He saw that underneath the grey particles there lied a piece of plastic, in a square, no it was rectangular, form.

He recognized it, because it looked exactly like the thing that stuck out his gameboy SP...


On the GAME PACK,

What it probably was,

It said

POKEMON: Special Collection.

He heard a few times about it,

POKEMON,

When his father was talking about

'When he was young'
And

'Those days'

When it was a cold November evening, just like this one...

His father had tried multiple times to make him try a game,
But without success...

Suddenly,
An idea popped into his head:

Why not try it?

He had more then enough of most of his games
AND
It would make his dad much happier

(And less whining)

About his annoying Pokémon...

In the mean while...

That same dad had arrived at his little home, waving at the kid next door, before opening the door...

He asked his wife were young Casper was, because he wanted to show him something...

Casper’s mom replied with:

"He’s getting the water bottles out of the basement.”

His father suddenly panicked and ran down the stairs…

Was his wife smiling because she wanted to calm him, or does she...

...


Casper was about to turn the power on, when his father suddenly came running down the stairs, saying:

“No Casper, no..."

But it was already too late...

This post has been edited by Scriptor Scorpio: Aug 19 2008, 05:54 AM

[Xanadu View Member Profile]

Three Musketeers ( Erm that was your name on Crater wasn't it?) that's you isn't it!

You did an ok job on your revising, take my word peoples, it had been a LOT worse! (Ehhh, no offence Scriptor...)

May I suggest, you put one chapter per post, you might intimidate new readers, welcome to Pokedox!

(I hope you remember me!)

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Please put a new chapter in a new post, i didn't bother reading ll of it i ony read to the 4th chapter i got really bored and wondered how long it was, please do that. Thanks

[Scriptor Scorpio View Member Profile]

Three Musketeers ( Erm that was your name on Crater wasn't it?) that's you isn't it!

You did an ok job on your revising, take my word peoples, it had been a LOT worse! (Ehhh, no offence Scriptor...)

May I suggest, you put one chapter per post, you might intimidate new readers, welcome to Pokedox!

(I hope you remember me!)

Hey! Off course I remember you! Well, the idea of this topic is to have several stories of several writers, but when every writer puts their chapters on this in separate posts, the stories will get mixed up. But, I have already found a solution! I'll first finish my first story 'The Game Pack', and put it in separate posts. When it's finished, I'll put an add for other writers for them to begin the second story, and after they finish it, an add for the third story, and so on and so on... If nobody reacts, I'll put one of my other stories here. I'll make a table when I/someone starts the second story... Off course, if anyone wishes to post their story, they have to ask first...

And now...

Oh now, this chappie's only 15 scrolls long! Gah, bad luck! But it will lengthen, a lot, believe me...

Part 2: Pixel dudes!

The screen lit up and blinded Casper and his father...


A few seconds later, there was no sign of Casper or...


...

It took a while before Casper was brave enough to open his eyes after a mysterious shock wave had hit him, and when he did, he was again shocked by what he saw:

Casper opened his eyes and, looking in the mirror at himself, screamed, “Aaaaaah! I'm a pixel dude,” After which he screamed some more…

Dad (?) said: “Look what you've done! I told you not to touch anything!”


Casper screamed to an even higher tone, startled by his dad, but then said: “... Uh, you didn't...”

His dad thought for a moment, then decided:
“Don’t touch anything from now on!
Aah!”

He screamed as he saw Casper pushing a button near him:

“What did I tell you!”

Casper replied with saying that since he is a pixel dude, he can do anything I want...

Which led him to saying:

“Yeah freedom!”

“So what I'm still your father, even worse, your pixel father!!!” his dad said to tease him.

”Oh man, well easy come, easy go,” sighed a disappointed Casper.

”You call opening an interdimensional gate 'easy come'???” his dad asked still gasping over what had happened.

Casper couldn’t reply to that, when suddenly, he remembered something:

“Hey, wait a minute, how do you know all this intersomething stuff?”

Then his dad revealed something unbelievable…: He made the Game Pack...

This time, Casper gasped, because of the startling news of course, and replied with:

“What?!”

His dad said it once again…

But Casper said he heard him the first time,
He wanted to know what he was talking about.

“Well, when I was young...” he commenced…



“Oh no, here we go again...” Casper interrupted.

His dad was very angry and silenced him quickly.

After that,
He went on with his story…:

“Well, as I was saying,

When I was young, I was a huge fan of Pokémon and I wanted to live the adventure myself, be in it...

So I made The Game Pack.

Unfortunately, the experiment failed and I hid it in the basement, where you found it...


Casper gasped, for the second time,

“WHAT? Why couldn't you hide it in a top secret vault, like everyone else?!”

Dad gave a real lame excuse, “Uh... I ran out of money...”

Casper sighed, whispering
‘typical’,
when he remembered another thing…

Didn’t he say that the experiment failed?

Indeed, he did.

Then how did they become pixel dudes?

”All will be explained in time...,” his father wisely replied, “but for now, I must show you something...”

This post has been edited by Scriptor Scorpio: Aug 19 2008, 05:55 AM

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Muhaha, this one's 24 scrolls! But, still nobody's replying...

Well, here's the next chapter:

Part 3: The close call

Casper followed his dad upstairs, wondering what he was about to see...

He was still puzzled by all he had learned and saw, especially his pixel appearance, which he studied fascinated by looking at his reformed hands...

When they were on the ground floor, his dad told him to look out the window, what he, impatient as he was, immediately did...

(Wow, that's quite a change...)

And what he saw would amaze anyone...

Everywhere he looked, he saw pixel houses, pixel trees, pixel humans, and...

He watched as he saw somebody that looked awfully familiar,

About to be attacked by a grey monster that looked a little like a dog...


Heroic as he was, he ran out the door, before his dad could say something about his reaction...


Casper ran towards the grey thing, saying:

“Hey, leave him alone, get off of him, you grey hound-beast-koala or something!”

But the kid said:

“What are you talking about? He's my pet!”

Casper gasped again, but silently, then exclaimed,

“Your pet?!”


“Yeah,” the kid went on,

”It's a ,
I got it for my birthday, isn't it cool?”

“Hello?

...

Er... hello?”

Casper, who had been speechless for a while, was scared by the yell.

“As I was saying, don't you think my

Looks cool?”

“Er... yeah, very cool...” Casper replied shocky.

Casper’s dad had reached the two and took over:

“I'm sorry for my son; he's a bit startled by... the environment...”

“Oh sorry, I didn't introduce myself, my name is Joe, I live next door,” Joe apologized.

Casper suddenly snapped out of his gaze and introduced himself too.

...

“Nice to meet you, Casper, did you move in here?” Joe asked curiously.

Dad answered in his place:
“Yes, we did, we're new here.”

“But dad...” Casper uttered.

“I'm sorry”, Casper’s dad interrupted,
“But we have to go now; Casper and I have some work to do,
If you don't mind…”

“Of course not, well see ya around Mr....” Joe said.

“Pack,” Casper’s dad filled in.


Joe thought for a while, then said:
“See ya later Mr. Pack and… Packman,” while pointing at Casper.

(I know Pacman is written like this, but else it wouldn't fit in the joke)

Dad and Joe laughed, while Casper still remained petrified...

...

When they're back inside…


Casper’s dad sighed:
“Whew that was close...”

He leaned against the wall of the kitchen for a while...

Casper, while still gazing, asked, “What is going on here, what was that... that... Poochyena?!

Was it a...”

“Pokémon?” his dad filled in.


“Pokémon...” Casper whispered.



“I think you'll probably want some kind of explanation, right?” his dad asked.

“Yes, please...”

“Well, do you know what the Game Pack did?”

“Yes...”

“Well... Tell me.”

“We're in a videogame?”

His dad made a cutting beep sound and said:

“Wrong.”

“Huh?”

This post has been edited by Scriptor Scorpio: Aug 19 2008, 05:55 AM

[Xanadu View Member Profile]

“your pet?!”

Notice something slightly missing there? A capital maybe...

[Scriptor Scorpio View Member Profile]

Wow!
Thanks, I'll change it right away!
That was sharp.

[Scriptor Scorpio View Member Profile]

28 scrolls!!!

Part 4: This world...

“Oh really, I wish I got a kid like Diria (member from Pokémon Crater) not like you. Diria worked with me on the project and guessed better then you did!” His dad sighed.

“Then what [/b]is[b] the right answer?” Casper asked with desperation written all over his face.

“The Game Pack turned our world, for the second time...” his dad began…

Casper interrupted him again by gasping and exclaiming,

“What?”

“Could you let me finish for just this once?!”

“Ok ok, calm down... Jeeze...”


“Well, as I was saying, the Game Pack turned our world into a Pokémon world, which means that everything is now 'pokémonized '!”

Casper was amazed once again…

“We must turn off the gameboy to get our world back,” his father went on.

“Er, we?”

“Yes, we. Well, mostly you...”

“But I don't know anything about Pokémon!”

“Don't worry I'll guide you all the way and you'll have this...”



Casper’s dad handed him a blue device with a screen, displaying him, but drawn in manga style...

“Now, that's what I'm talking about! I look good!”

“Yeah... Right...

Anyway, that's a Pokédex and also your ID. Make sure nothing happens to it,” he said,

sounding like good old Professor Oak, Casper's dad noticed.


“And what do I have to do with it?”

“You'll see…” he said in a mysterious way…

He pressed a hidden button on the Pokédex.

Suddenly, blue goo crawled up his arm and started to engulf him.

The goo also went over his manga picture...

He screamed, but no sound was heard...

...

For a moment, he thought he would soon wake up and everything would be back to normal...

Or, he would die...

But, luckily for us, he didn't.

When the blue goo stabilized, some of its parts changed colour, eventually resulting into a strange outfit:

A blue bandana with a bow and dot on it, in a black colour (with other words, the one you always see on the hat/cap/... of the protagonist of a Pokémon game), a blue jeans, that hangs half down his shoes, a sweater with a pocket for his Pokédex, where he put it, and black-grey gloves...

Casper’s dad handed him a backpack, saying,

“You might need this.”

“Thanks dad...“


Casper got lights in his eyes, in which we see a raging storm, waiting to be unleashed…



In his mind is seen that all the Pokémon knowledge of the world is stored into his dusty, rarely used brain...

“I am ready,” he said with a darkened voice.

“Then it is time for your destiny...”

They walked up to a strange desk, hidden behind some old roof plates...

(Sound familiar?)

When they had cleared the rubble, they saw one Pokéball...

“Dad: Now, choose your Pokémon, and begin your journey, your destiny!”

“There is only one ball!”

Casper’s dad sighed at his son, for the millionth time, and then he said,

“Although you have learned much since I gave you that Pokédex, you're still as clueless as you've always been. Inside the ball, there lies nothing... Unless you want that there lies something and if you do, it will be exactly the one you wanted...

Casper held the ball in the palm of his hand…

“Concentrate...” said his dad.

Casper concentrated…


“Concentrate...”

Casper concentrated harder…


“Concentrate!”

Casper concentrated so hard that his eyes turned into raging storms!


“Now, throw it!”


Casper threw the ball on the ground, while saying the name of his Pokémon...



The storm unleashed itself, together with the Pokémon...


SHELLOS!

A appeared before the eyes of Casper and his dad.



Casper greeted his first Pokémon and gave him the nickname Slug.


After a brief moment of happiness and bounding, Casper sent Slug back to its Pokéball...



“And now?” Casper asked.

“Now we must find any help we can get...”

This post has been edited by Scriptor Scorpio: Jun 24 2010, 03:06 AM

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Sorry I'm a bit late,

but I red the new chapter of houndoom 101's story,

so I didn't have much time left afterwards...

Anyway,

here's the next chapter...

83 scrolls

Part 5: The annnoying little helper

“And who did you have in mind?” Casper asked.

“First, remember that Poochyena kid?” his dad asked.

“Yes...”


“Well, we can ask him!”

“Ooooowww...”


“But remember, he mustn't know anything about our mission, so be discrete, ok?”


“Yeah yeah...”

“Now then, let's move out!”

...

After a while, they reached the front door of Joe's house. When they rang the doorbell, Joe almost immediately opened it...


“Hello Mr.Pack and... Packman (laughs), what can I do for you?”


Casper’s dad did the talking:

“We've come here to ask you if you want to join my son here on his Pokémon journey.”

“Well, ehm... (thinks for a while)I'm not sure... can I think about it?”
(For a longer while)

“Off course you may, but please give us the answer before tomorrow, because he'll be leaving soon...”

“Sure thing, see you then...”

“Bye Joe.”

“Bye Mr. Pack and Casper.”

Casper suddenly woke up because Joe said his name:

“Eh, bye...”

After that, Joe closed the door…

...

When they arrived back at their home...



“Who's next?” Casper asked anxiously.

“Don't you have friends?!”

“Oh, yeah, right, erm...”

Casper became a bit saddened…


His dad turned from a frustrated mood to a comforting mood…



“Don't worry, I'll be ok, Joe's coming with me,” Casper said, manning himself up a bit...


“Strange, why does that name sound so familiar, hmmm...?” Casper thought.


“Ok, we'll see what he has decided tomorrow... Now go get some sleep, it will be an exciting day tomorrow...”

Casper yawned and said:

“Ok... Ehm... Dad...?”

“Yes Casper?”

“What happened to Mom?”


“I have no idea, Son, no idea...”



“Wow, that's the first time dad doesn't know an answer to one of my questions. Ooooh... creepy...”

Casper thought shivering, while walking to his pixel bed…

The following morning...

...

Casper yawned and then walked downstairs for breakfast...

Mmm... I wonder where dad is...


“Good morning Casper.”

“Ah! Ehm... Good morning dad.”

“And? Ready for your big day?”

“As ready as I'll ever be.”

“Good. Now follow me...”


Outside the house...



“What is it?”

“You'll see...”

“Hey!” Joe said.

Casper was scared by the pop-up…


“And, are you ready for the big trip?” Joe asked.

He was a packed and sacked and ready to go. His Poochyena was resting in the Pokéball pinned on his shirt...


Casper recovered from his strange expression and said:

“Yeah, sure thing.”

“Ok, then we'll be off, bye Mr. Pack.”

“Bye, dad.”

Casper’s dad whispered to Casper:

“I'll be contact in with you all the way, with this (handed over a little microphone)”

“Thanks dad,” Casper whispered and putted the device in his ear.



A little while later...



“On the road to...”

“Stop. That. Song!” Casper yelled.

“Whaaaaaaaaat? It's catchy...” Joe said.

“Casper: And undescribingly annoying!

Especially, after 43 times!!!”


“Ok ok, I'll stop it, jeeeeze... huh?”

“What is it, heey? Where did he go?”

Joe was startled when Casper finds him in the bushes and said: “Come quickly!”

“Whaza?”

“NOW!”

Joe pulled Casper into the bushes and then said:

“And be quiet!”

Casper whispers: “For who or what are we hiding?”

“THEM!” Joe said, while pointing at a few trainers a bit further…

“What? Are you afraid of a few rookies?”

“We are rookies as well, remember?”

“That's what you think...”

“Huh?”

"I'll show you how it's done...”

Casper walked up to a youngster who was looking around...



“Hey you there!”

“Who, me?” the youngster asked, glaring at the big newcomer.

“Yeah you, let's battle!”Casper confirmed.

“Hah, wouldn't want anything more!”

FIRST BATTLE!

“By the way, my name's Stirf.”

(What kind of a name is that?!)

“By the way, you're gonna lose!” Casper informed Stirf.

“I'm gonna get you for THAT! Go !”

“Bye !”

“Huh? How did you do that?” asked the youngster, when he looked at his fainted ,

“Your Pokémon, nice Shellos by the way (this is getting old...), just got out...”



or 'Slug'

Appeared on the field...


“Well, it's very simple, actually,” Casper said, “I KO-ed it with Shellos his ... Pokéball!”


Youngster Stirf, Joe & Casper’s dad (who was listening in on the battle) their jaws fell wide open.


“Well, I told you, didn't I (referring to Joe)?” Casper proudly said.


Joe remained speechless until Casper tapped his shoulder, then he said: “Uh... Wow!”


“Thank you, thank you”

(Hey that rhymes),

Casper said, while making several bowes…


“But we still need to train more...”

“Ok ok...” Casper said grunting, “but one more thing… Gimme’ the money, Frits!


The youngster squeaked, gave Casper the money and ran like the wind!


“It’s good to be good,”


(Hey, I rhymed again)

Casper proudly said…


In the grass...



“Wait until there comes one...” Joe whispered to his impatient friend…

“Hey, why do we have to go into the grass?” Casper complained,

“It doesn't make any sense... Wild beasts or
Pokémon should normally live in forests or something...”


“Yes! There is one!” Joe suddenly said.


“Finally!” Casper said. Then he suddenly spotted another one,

“What do you say if we go catch some Pokémon and meet up here, later on?”


“Sounds fine to me.”

“Oké, see ya later...”


“...alligator!”

Casper slowly crawled to the Pokémon, when suddenly... it spotted him!

It looked firmly at him, not seeming to want to flee at all...

“Oh, so you wanna battle, huh? Fine by me... go Slug!”

Slug appeared for the third time and was ordered a mud-slap on the...

What was it actually?


By looking closer, Casper could see that it was a , standing in the attack position…

“Oh no, that's a flying type, now what? What a beginners mistake... Oh wait…” Casper said, while Casper grabbed a…

“This can work too,


Go Pokéball!”


The tried to resist, but it wasn't strong enough to break out, so...

,

Who is nicknamed Nick,

Was... caught!


FIRST CATCH!


“Yes, I've got it!”

“Me too,” Joe (?) said.

Casper was startled once again by him popping up and said:

“Could you stop sneaking up to me like that?”

“Sorry, but look...” Joe apologized, then he threw a Pokéball on the ground…


“I've got a !”


“Great! Now go get some Pokémon!”

“I already did!”

“Oh yeah right... Anyway...” Casper said, when suddenly he saw a bunch of good-looking girls, “Oh man, pixel chicks!”

Casper walked up to the ‘pixel chicks’…

“I wouldn't do that if I we...”


Casper (in the distance) said to the girls: “Hey chickies, I'm Casper…”


Casper did something that they obviously didn't like because...

...

Casper returned to Joe, very 'broken'...


While rubbing over his injuries, he said: “Oh man, pixel bruises...”

This post has been edited by Scriptor Scorpio: Aug 19 2008, 05:58 AM

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Well, here's the next chapter. (100 scrolls)

Just 4 after this one and I will post new material...

Part 6: Battles and chicks

“You shouldn't have done that...” said Joe, while taking two T-bones.

One for him to cook over their little camp fire, and one for Casper's black eye.

“Done what?” Casper asked, pretending to be clueless, lifting his shoulders in innocence…


Joe gave Casper a you-know-what-I-mean-look…


“Whaaaaat? What is wrong with giving a 'chick' a compliment?”


“You call that a compliment?!”


Joe pointed at a very big bruise on his cheek…


“No...”


“Well then...”

Casper stopped arguing with Joe, because he decided that it was not worth it...



Night was starting to fall and the two adventurers decided to set up their tents on the nearby field...


...


The next morning...


Casper had already awakened from his sleep and was walking around...


“Ah, the second day of our journey... Hmmm... I already long for my home in Twerpan City...”

“Is that so, Twerp?” someone suddenly asked…


“What?! Who said that?”

“I did...” the mysterious person said…

A strange kid with expensive clothes stepped out of the shade and introduced himself as Decon S....


“Hey, why did you call me that?”

“The citizens of Twerpan City are called Twerps...”

“And who says that?!”

“I do, Twerp.”

“You're gonna pay for that... Richie...”

“It’s Decon S.!”


“Whatever... Let's battle!”



SECOND BATTLE!

(Nick) VS.

(The commands of the trainers are left out. If you want them to be in it, let me know)

Nick rapidly Tackled the Pidgey, who isn’t impressed and Tackles Nick too.

It was a critical hit and Nick endured severe damage…

He growled cutely and dodged the Tackle of the Pidgey…

This went on for a while and when the Pidgey finally hit Nick, it nearly did something!

Nick made his move and KO-ed him with his strongest Tackle!

“This isn’t over yet!” Decon S. said…

NEXT MATCH!

(Slug) VS.

Rattata quickly attacked Slug with the attack with the name –How do you guess- Quick Attack!

But then it was Shellos’ turn, which attacked with a Mud-Slap!

Rattata wasn’t hurt much, but his speed was lowered…

That didn’t help much either, because Rattata kept attacking quickly… (with the same attack…)

Shellos hardened himself, over and over, and then made his move, when Rattata’s Quick Attack’s PP ran out and it wasn’t quick enough with his Tackle…

Shellos bombarded him with Mud-Slaps and… KO-ed him!

…

Casper won!

“Oké Richie, hand over the cash,” Casper said.

“It’s De... oh never mind,” Richie said and handed over the money…

“Thank you very much... now scram!” he yelled.

Richie squeaked, and then ran away…


“Ah, I love the smell of victory in the morning...” said Casper, while sniffing…


“Me too...”said Joe the pop-up, while sniffing as well…

Casper was startled once again…

“Stop doing that!” he yelled.

(The sniffing or the sneaking up on someone...)

“Sorry... And, ready for a new day of flaming hot battles?”

“Absolutely!”

“Then come on!”


The two friends spent their day with levelling up their Pokémon and catching new ones, that are also levelled up...




At the end of the day, this is what their teams looked like:

Casper
(Slug) Lv. 10
(Nick) Lv. 9
(Deke) Lv. 9
(Lee) Lv. 10


Joe
Lv. 10
Lv. 9
Lv. 9
Lv. 9 (evolved from a )


Casper and Joe had come a long way and were near the next city, when suddenly...

“Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!” a girl shouted.


Someone called/yelled for help!


Casper and Joe immediately rushed to the source of the repeated screams, where this strange scenario enveloped...



“Hey, let her go!” Casper yelled.

Two strange men, dressed in strange outfits,



Were holding a young, approximately 15 year old girl (she wears a yellow T-shirt, has beautifully brown hair with some traces of blond, that hanged down to the height of her waist, with a yellow bandana on top, a white belt and a white skirt that has the same marks on it as the one on Casper’s bandana, orange-brown sneakers and white gloves with black tips)


And she made it pretty clear that she didn't like it...



“Finally somebody heard me! Can you give me a hand here please?” she exclaimed.


“Don't worry, we'll save ya!” Joe said heroically.

“Right!” Casper agreed.

“Oh, you think so, huh?” one of the strange men said,

“Well I'll tell you this; nobody gets in the way of team Revenge!”

“Revenge?” Joe said curiously.

Casper, however, interrupted: “More battling, less talking!”

Joe and Casper VS. Two Revenge grunts
Joe => V
Casper => (Slug) S.

First Poochyena howled to raise his attack.

Then Shellos launched a few Mud-Slaps, which made quick work of the Croagunk.

Together, they attacked the Machop, who quickly fainted…



Joe and Casper won!

“This is not over...” the second Revenge grunt said.

“Oh yes it is,” Casper said self assured,

“Because Slug here has a new trick up its sleeve, thanks to you... MUD BOMB!”


“RUN!” the two Revenge grunts yelled.

Casper, Joe and the girl laughed…



After freeing the girl from the ropes she was covered with, they started to talk...


“And who may you be?” Casper asked.


“I was named Marina, but if anyone dares say it (even the writer?),” the girl said,

“That person will soon miss a few teeth. Instead, you two can call me Mary.”


“Alright, pleased to meet you Mary, I am Joe,” Joe said.

“And my name is Casper,” Casper said.

So they introduced themselves to Marina…

Marina knocked out the writers teeth, and then she said:

“Nice meeting you, Joe and Casper.”

Joe and Casper asked Mary (I want to keep the rest of my teeth, thank you) why those Revenge grunts were holding her captive…


She explained that she followed them to their secret base, where they discovered her...

She suspected that there was something there that must remain in the darkness, unseen, unknown and unheard of...

She asked their help in solving the mystery, and they agreed...


…


Late in the evening, they arrived in Lemechne Town, where they spent the night in a Pokécenter...


The following day...


Casper couldn't wait to go the gym of Lemechne Town and so he awakened Joe and Mary very brutely…



After some grunts and yawns, the two sleepyheads followed Casper to the gym...

Casper quickly defeated the other trainers and then headed straight towards the gym leader for the final battle...


“So you have managed to defeat my trainers, huh?” she asked,

“That's quite impressive... but not good enough to defeat to take me, Michelle,

On! Come on, let's start this battle!”



FIRST GYM BATTLE!

(Slug) VS.

Scizor used Leer over and over and over again,

But in the meanwhile, Shellos had weakened him with Water Pulse and, eventually,

Confused him!

Shellos made his move and defeated him!

VS.

The Shieldon kept using Protect and it became very annoying, when suddenly…

It failed!

Shellos hit him hard with Mud Bomb and…

Shieldon fainted!

Casper has won!

“Ok ok, all right, all right, here you go you deserved it,” Michelle said,

While handing over the cash and the Armor badge.

“Yes, I've got it,” Casper said, while looking at his price,


A shiny piece of metal that felt cold to the touch…


“Can we go now?” Joe yawned…
“Sure,” Casper said, “after we get some supplies...”

“You mean like... food???” Mary asked anxiously.

“Well yeah, that and...”Casper said.


Casper wanted to end his phrase with ‘some other things’, but…



Mary and Joe had gained renewed energy and stormed the shops and very quickly they had bought enough supplies to feed an army or themselves...



After the meal, they decided to let out the Pokémon, so they could enjoy the fresh air.

After the preceding events, this is how their teams looked like:

Casper

(Slug) Lv. 12
(Nick) Lv. 9
(Deke) Lv. 9
(Lee) Lv. 10


Joe

Lv. 10
Lv. 9
Lv. 9
Lv. 9

Mary ( new! )

Lv. 10
Lv. 9
Lv. 9
Lv. 9



We found ourselves suddenly at a different place, where one of the Revenge grunts reported to a mysterious person what had happened to the spy... The person gave the order to do something, with a mysterious grin on his/hers

(We don't know which gender the person was)

Face...

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I just noticed something in chapter.. four when you catch Starly, it wouldn't be affected by Mud Slap if they were in a game.

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Part 5 actually...

Well,

Casper, with all the Pokémon knowledge in his empty head...

Casper: Hey!

Keep quiet you!

Anyway,

because he knew that Starly wouldn't be affected by Ground attacks,

(At the time, the Shellos only had Ground attacks that actually did some damage),

he just captured the Starly with a Pokéball.

Any questions?

Any comments, from anyone, on the story?

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Well, here is part 7...

But, to all readers, if there are any,

why don't you reply?!

Anyway, after this one only 3 more...

(90 scrolls)

Part 7: Are we there yet? Are we there yet? Are we there yet? Are we there yet?

"Are we almost there yet?" asked an impatient Joe. Our comrades are on the way to the next village, Woyell Village. But, It's taking them a bit longer then they thought... A WHOLE bit...



“On the...” Joe began enthusistically.

“If you even think that song, you'll sing it in a much higher tone...” Casper warned, at which Mary laughed...


Joe became very scared, but tried once more:

“Oh... please?”


“No!” they screamed together.


“But it's...” Joe began…

Ok, now everyone, (that’s you readers…)

Warning readers, the 4th wall is about to get hit by a hammer, a big hammer, even worse, my hammer!


“Catchy and undesribingly annoying!!!”


“Aaaaaah... Ghosts!” Joe yelled.

“Those are our readers, airhead!” Mary sighed.

”Do we have... readers?” Casper asked.

“Of course we do,” Mary said,

“This is a story, remember?”

“It is?” Joe said even more clueless then Casper.

”Yes!!!” Mary shouted.


“Ok ok, you don't have to shout at me...” Joe said…


“Yes I have to, you're such a baby!” Mary said.

“Take that back!” Joe said angry.

“Ok, I'll take it back... fetus!” Mary went on.

“Hey! Eh... what is that?” Joe asked, again clueless.

Casper suddenly putted up a pair of glasses on…


“Where did you get those from?!” Joe said.


“Found them...” Casper proclaimed.

(Yeah right)

Casper knocked out the rest of the writer’s teeth…


Joe thought:


“I think I better stay in silence... Wait, is this silence... Aaaaaah!”


Joe lay on the ground…

“A fetus (or foetus, or fœtus) is a developing mammal or other viviparous vertebrate, after the embryonic stage and before birth. The plural is fetuses (foetuses, fœtuses) or, very rarely, foeti.

In humans, the fetal stage of prenatal development begins at the end of the eighth week after fertilisation, when the major structures and organ systems have formed, until birth,” Casper said like a real professor.


“What are you, a Pokédex?!” Mary yelled.

“...”

Joe said nothing…


“You still don't get it, do you?” Mary asked.

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Mary slapped Joe out of his gaze…

“Take that back!” Joe shouted.


“Never!” Mary yelled.


The two of them rolled over the ground, scratching and biting as they went...



Casper sighed:

“Kids…”

“Yeah, these days...”


“Whaza?” Casper said.

“Your microphone...” his dad sighed.

“Oh... yeah... right...” Casper uttered.


His dad:

“And, how's it going?”

“Pretty bad, team Revenge, fighting kids, a shiny poke in everyones party... Oh and I've got a badge!” Casper told.

“Aaaaaah, that's terrible!” his dad screamed,

“Wait, those last two were good, right?”

“Maybe...” Casper said, while lifting his eyebrows quickly up and down…

“Stop doing that!” his dad yelled.


“How do...”

“I know you…”

“Oh yeah, then what's my favorite color?”

“Errr...”

“My favorite food?

What are my hobbies?

What are my (new) friends’ names?

When is my birthday?!!!”


“Errr... Can't hear you” his dad said and made a very fake noise,

“I'm in a tunnel,” he made a very fake noise,

“I'm //// losing you...”


“Grrr... why do I have to have a dad that always has to work... Hey!”


Marina and Joe were well on the way to beat Casper his pixel bruises record...



“Cut that out! No Marina, don't try to strangle him! No Joe, don't do that! Aaaaaah!” he said.


Two Revenge grunts were walking by when they saw the bloody life-or-death-duel...



“Do you think we should attack?” Revenge grunt 3 asked.

“Are ya kidding?” Revenge grunt 4 said,

“If we let them be for half an hour, they will knock out themselves. Thus, less work for us...”

“I don't know, don't you think...” Revenge grunt 3 asked.

“Grunt's don't think, they do what they're told, that's it.”

“But didn't they tell us to catch them...”


“Well, erm...”


“And didn't you think of the idea to wait an half an hour so they can knock out themselves?”

“I... I... Stop thinking!”


The two philosophers walk past our comrades, to discuss this irrelevant matter...


“Hey, weren't that a couple of Revenge grunts?” Casper asked.

But Mary and Joe were busy scratching each others eyes out…


“ I've got to stop this before it gets out of control...”


Mary and Joe screamed like crazy people going out of control…


“Never mind...”


Mary and Joe were still fighting but it wouldn't take long before they kill eachother... or worse…


(What could be more worse then killing... Oh yeah... kissing! You like her don't you?)


Casper knocked the jaw of the writer with an uppercut…


(I'll schwust go schwere...)


“I've got it! Hey, embryos!”

“What did he call us?” Casper asked.

Mary said, while rubbing her bruises:

”He called us embryos, I think...”

“Hey! What does that mean?” Joe asked clueless as ever.

Casper putted his glasses on…

“Not the Pokédex thingy!” Joe said.

“Shut it!” Mary commanded.
.
“ Thank you,” Casper said.

“You're welcome,” she said with a soft glance.


“ An embryo (Greek: ἔμβρυον, plural ἔμβρυα) is a multicellular diploid eukaryote in its earliest stage of prenatal development. The child is called an embryo from the moment of fertilization until the end of the 8th week of gestational age in humans, whereafter it is instead called a fetus,” Casper explained.


Joe remained speechless…

“Not this again...” Mary sighed.

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“You’re taking up space!” Mary yelled.

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Mary slapped Joe again in the face…

“Thank you,” Joe said.

“You're welcome.”

“Finally, it's over,” Casper sighed relieved.

“Not so fast... Packman,” Joe interrupted.

“(gniffles) Packman?”

“Not again!” Casper yelled.

“Oh certainly, you called us embryos, remember?” Mary said.

“Oh oh...” Casper ‘oh-ohed.’


Casper ran away, screaming like a (angry Mary looks at me)... never mind.


“ Screaming like a writer?” Mary added.

I’m looking very scared right now…

”I shouldn't have thought 'screaming like a girl'... Oh no, I'm ding it again!”

“After him!” Mary yelled like a hunter lusting for blood!

”Why did I write that?!”

“Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!” I yelled.


Casper and I ran away, screaming like two... never mind...



At last, the writer could return to his safe computer to type his amazing story on it...



“Finally, a girl chases me, and I don't even like it!” Casper said.

(Danny Phantom quote)


A hord of mutant zombies came around the corner, wait... that's another story...



The three comrades finally slowed down in Woyell Village, where a peace treaty was signed...

(For now...)


In the mean while, the two Revenge grunts (3 and 4) were standing back, looking at what used to be the campsite of our comrades, philosophising over life... and other stuff...


“They're not here anymore!” the third said. (Revenge grunt 3)

“Thank you Captain Obvious...

I told you we had to grab them while we could...” the fourth said. (Revenge grunt 4)

“Uh, no you didn't...”

“Then who did?”

“Uh, I did...”

“No I did.”

“No, I did.”


The two get into a fight...


“I did!” I yelled.


“Ooooh...” the two said.


(They were too dumb grunts to think about who could have said that...)


“What should we talk about now?” the third said.

“Mmm...” the fourth said.

“Oh, I know... We should philosophise about things...”

“Like what?”

“Uh... The internet?

(Fairly Oddparents quote)

In the mean while, back in Woyell Village…

...

“Um... it's getting late. Shouldn't we head for a hotel or something?” Mary asked.

“We should head for the Pokémoncenter,” Joe said.

“Why not a hotel?” Casper asked curiously.

He found it weird every trainer went to an uncomfortable Pokémoncenter, even when it's free...

“Because that's what all trainers do...” Joe explained,

”Plus there is a little thingy between me and the owner of the hotels around here...”

“You mean...” Casper commenced.

“Whaaaat? I was young and adventurous...” Joe said.

(Joe and the daughter of the owner of the hotels like... had a thing...)

“You're still young and adventurous...”Casper remarked...

“That's what I mean...” Joe said, while looking at Mary in an unpleasant way…



…

“How you're doing?” he asked. (Friends quote, by Joey)


Mary knocked Joe out…


“Come on, let's head for the Pokémoncenter,” Casper said, ignoring the knock out.

“Fine,” Mary replied.


Casper putted Joe on his back and carried him to the Pokémoncenter...


Shortly thereafter, they arrived there...



(Yeah, this paragraph is gonna be awesome... I can see it before my eyes... Marina in... hey what are you doing ?!)

Mary punched the writers lights out…



…



“...”

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Attention everybody! In the next chapter, the writer will awake after he was knocked out by Mary. With him, there are his brothers, who tell their amnesiac brother his memories, which he has lost… After that, they will appear here and there to influence and confuse the situation by breaking the fourth wall. If you don’t like it, just skip it. It doesn’t influence the plot in an important way… Much…

(126 scrolls)

Part 8: Breaking walls... And heads as well!


“Ow, my head... Where am I?” I asked.


“You're in our house...” someone said.

“Ah!” I shouted,

“Who are you?”


The person sighed,

“I'm your brother...”


“I have a brother?!”

“Actually you have two...”


“I have two brothers?!!”


“Duh,

we are called The three musketeerS!”

(It used to be The PokébrotherS, then the The three musketeers, now were apart but not for long))

“Ow... I've never thought about that... So where is my othe' brothe'?”

“Here I am!” the othe’ brothe’ said…


“Gah!” I yelled,

“Who are you people?!”

“Your brothers...”


“Oh, yeah, right...”


My brothers sighed…


“What happened actually?” I asked curiously.

“Let us first introduce ourselves,” the first brother said,

“Because I think you've got amnesia. This is João, your othe' brothe' ...

“Hello,” João said…

“And I am Tim,” Tim said.

“And... Who am I?” I asked.

“You're Banana,” Tim said.

“You're kidding, right?” I asked nervously.


“Nope,” Tim said.

“I am Banana?!!!” I yelled clueless.


“No, I was joking...” Tim admitted.


I wiped the sweat of my forehead…

“You are Tomato,” Tim said.

“What?!” I screamed.

“Stop teasing him!” João interrupted.


“Oké oké, your real name is Matyas...” Tim finally admitted.


“That's a strange name...” I said…

“Indeed...” João agreed.

“But tell me now, what happened to me?” I asked curiously.

“Well... A girl punched your lights out...

“What?!” Matyas exclaimed,

“Am I a wuss or something?”

“Do I really have to answer that?” Tim asked.

“Why you...”

“Knock it off you two, we don't have time,” João interrupted.

“We don't? I asked, while holding my right fist ready…

“Off course, we have a story to write!” Tim said.

I lowered my fist and then asked:

“But I don't remember anything...”

“This should help...” João said, and then knocked me out with a hard object…

...

“Now what?” Tim asked.


“Now, we wait...” João said mysteriously.



A few hours later...



“Ow, my head... Huh?” I said, while counting the bumps on my head,

“I don't remember being K.O-ed twice...”

“Those are worries for later,” my brothers said,

“Right now, you have a story to write...”

“But I...” I commenced…

Now!” they yelled.

I grunted and then whispered silently:

“Little brothers...”

I heard that!” João said.

“S-s-sorry...” I uttered.

“Get to work...” Tim said.

“Yes boss...” I said,

“Well, here comes part 8...”

“Hope you like it...” my brothers said.

“Hey! That's my line!” I said.

“Get on with it!” Tim said.

Me: “Yes sir...”


...


The next morning...



Joe yawned:

“What happened?”

“Well... A girl knocked you out...” Casper said.

“What am I, a...” Joe commenced.

“Wuss or something?” Tim said.


“Gah!” Joe exclaimed,

“Who said that?!”

“I did...” Tim said.

Joe 'gah-ed' again and then said:

“Who are you?! Joe said.

“The othe' pokébrothe'...” Tim said.

“Who?” Joe asked clueless.

Tim sighed:

“The co-writer...”

“Hey, and what about me?!” João said.

“Oh not him...” Tim sighed.


“Hey, I heard that...” João said.

“Eh, may I say something?” Joe asked.


Everyone yelled:


”No!”


“Fine, I'll...” Joe commenced…


I wagged my finger:


“No talking!”


“But...” Joe tried…


“You heard him!” Tim said.


“I...” Joe tried…


“Should be ashamed...” João ended.

(Danny Phantom quote)

Joe grunted…


(What he shouldn’t have done, because…)


I hit him with a very hard large object…


“What did you do?!” Casper asked.


“I hit him with a very hard large object…” I said, kind of repeating myself…


“But why?” Casper asked.

“He wasn't quiet...” I uttered.


“But he was grunting!” Casper said.

“Oops...” I said,

“Well no biggey, right?” I asked.


“He's one of the protagonists and you call it 'no biggey'?!” Casper screamed.


(This brings back memories, don't it, Casper?)


“Eh, erm...” I uttered…

“He did it!” I yelled, while pointing at Tim.

“?”

“Eh, erm... He hit him!” I shouted, while pointing at João..

“??”

“Eh, erm.... You killed him!” I screamed, while pointing at Casper…

“???”

“Well... What about him?” I exclaimed, while pointing at Joe….

“That is Joe, the victim!” Casper said.

“Exactly! It was his own fault!” I said, not making any sense.

(Suicide or something...)

“Then what did he do?” Casper asked intrigued by the theory and/or its stupidity…

“He grunted...” I answered.



Casper, Tim and João hit the closets with their heads out of madness…




A few days later...



“Where am I?” Joe asked, feeling a bit dizzy and disorientated…


“Not this again...” Tim commenced…


“Can't we skip this?” João asked…


“Maybe if we hit him again...” I asked…


Casper paniced, saying:


“Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!”



Casper tried to stop Matyas (that’s me) by jumping on him...



In the mean time, Mary had entered the room...



Mary saw the chaos in the room and then said:

What is going on here?!”



Everyone stopped and stood in awe by seeing the young beautiful woman...



(Mary: Well, thank you for the compliment)


That stood in the door opening...



Suddenly, Joe got up because of the high voice and stepped out of his bed... At least that's what everyone thought...


Joe said, while sleepwalking:

“Oh, come here, my darling...”

(Joe stepped in the direction of Casper… )


“Ah!” Casper exclaimed…


“Quiet...” I said,

“It is very bad for a sleep walker to wake him up...”

“Especially when he was hit on the head twice...” Tim remarked…


“But he is trying to kiss me!” Casper said.


“Then evade him!” João suggested…


Everyone quickly jumped out of the way, but Mary got trapped in the corner...


“Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!” she yelled.


“Quietly...”


Mary screamed silently…


“My darling...” Joe went on…


“Wait a minute...” Mary remarked…



Joe, who is faking that he's sleepwalking, headed for Mary's mouth, however...



Mary knocked Joe

(Again)

Out...

”What are you doing?!” Casper screamed in agony…


“Pervert!” Mary said.

“I'm innocent!” I said, without realising what I said…


Everyone looked amazed at me...


“Not you...” Mary said.

Everyone that is not knocked out and besides Mary said, relieved:


“Oooooow...”


“I meant Joe...” Mary explained…

“Why?” João asked clueless as ever…

(Maybe even more clueless than Casper or Joe)

”He wasn’t sleepwalking!” Mary yelled.


“You never get anything, do you?” Tim asked his little brother…


“Take that back!” João commanded…


”Never!” Tim proudly answered.


The two had a wrestling contest...


“Kids...” I said…

(Again... Memories...)

“You are still a kid, remember...” Mary adjusted…


“No I'm not...” I said…


Mary took a pan out of her bag…


“Where did you get that from?” Casper shouted.


“I went to magicians’ school for three years...” Mary explained…


“Whaza...” I began,

“Never mind. I'm not a kid anymore...”

“Do you want a trip to the magical dream land of milk, cookies and oversized bruises?” Mary asked me menacingly.

“No ma'am,” I said.


“Good...

And what about you?” Mary said, while pointing at Casper with her pan…


“Spare me!

Hey, why are you making me look like a wuss?” Casper asked, while looking at me…


“Do I really have to answer that?” I asked…


“Why you...” Casper commenced…


“No, I won't take it back,” I interrupted…


“Fine,” Casper said,

Attack!”

“En garde,” I said.

“Whaza?” Casper uttered.


I sighed:


“Attack...”


“Oh right...


(By the way, ‘en garde’ is french for ‘be on your garde’


(, because I’m going to stab you or something...


In case you didn’t know…)

Casper and I also had a wrestling match...


Mary sighed…


Joe had come to his senses in the mean while and saw the wrestling matches and commented

Them like this:

“Huh... oh... chick fight!

“What...” Tim commenced…

“Did...” João went on…

“He...” I took over…

“Call...” And then Casper did…

“You?” Mary finished.

“Eh... a little joke?” Joe tried…

“Get him!” everyone said…

“Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!” Joe uttered…





Well that was part 8…

(I’m rubbing my bruises),

Hope you...

Everyone else said:

Liked it!

“Oké oké... bye...”

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nice part 8
please be done before June...lol

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Héhé,

I think,

when I disappear off this forum and go behind my desk,

for a while off course,

I'll have 27 chapters on in total!

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Hey,
if I'm not mistaken it's update time!
Yeah!

...

Anyway... (139 scrolls)

“Well, here is part... What was it again?” I said.

“9?” Tim said.

“Or was it 10 already?” João asked.

“Stop confusing me!” I yelled.

Tim laughed:

“Alakazam, use Confusion!”


Alakazam gazed…


“Oh wait....” Tim said,

“Alakazam, use Psychic!”


Alakazam gazed again…


“What is it now?” Tim asked annoyed…

“That 's my Pokémon! I exclaimed.

“So...”

“That's it. Alakazam, use Psychic!” I told my Alakazam.

Tim fainted!


Alakazam gained 5 exp. points because his opponent was a weak wuss...


“Hey!” João said.

“Want a black-out?” I asked.

“Yes!”

“Huh?”


I look at João like he is some weirdo, what he was…


“I heard that!”

“Aaargh,” I said, then whispered…

“That shared laptop always...”

“I heard that!” he said.


“He can't read my thoughts...”

(Spongebob Squarepants quote)


”I heard that!!!”

“You're creepy, you know that?”

He said, while his eyes turned red and his voice deepened:


“What do you mean?”

Very... Hyperventilating, Darth Vader-like...

Anyway, here comes part 9...


(P.S.: We have fixed the fourth wall and will not shatter it again... much)





Part 9: The mustache

“Good morning...” Casper said.

“Hello…” Joe said…

Joe became creeped out by Caspers sudden friendliness...

“I brought you some breakfast...”

Joe became creeped out even more…


Mary stepped into the room...


“Hello Joe...” she said.

“Gah! Who are you people?!”

“We are your trusted companions...” Mary said…

“Trusted?!” Have you eaten to many Figy Berries?! Wait a minute...”

“Oh oh...” Casper suddenly said.

“Are you...” Joe began…

“Oké, we admit it, we are Revenge grunts...” the Revenge grunt confessed…

Joe was amazed...

“…Playing a joke on me?” he ended his phrase.

“Eh, yeah... we're playing a joke on you...” the fifth Revenge grunt tried.

“Oh, forget it...” the Female Revenge grunt said,

“Don't you think he heard it? Come on, let's take him down!”

The two took of their disguises and grabbed their Pokéballs…

“Oh, pelease...” Joe said.

Joe VS. Revenge grunt 5 and Female Revenge grunt


and VS. and


Poochyena began howling to raise his Attack, while Cascoon protected him and himself with Harden.

Pinsir focused his energy.

Croagunk tried to Mud-Slap Casccoon, but he didn’t have much luck…

Then Poochyena attacked the Croagunk with Tackle…

Pinsir Seismic Tossed him away, but it didn’t do much…

Poochyena and Casccoon tackled their foes, over and over again…

And…

Joe won!

“Huh?”

Joe's is evolving!



…



It evolved into a !


“Yes!” Joe said.


“Aaargh...” the Female Revenge grunt said,

“Why couldn't you tape your mouth?”

“Eh... Wouldn't he have, like... Noticed?”

“Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaargh!”

“Hey, you sound just like a pirate,” Joe said,

“Ever considered of joining Team Aqua?”

“I was a member...”

“What happened? Did they kicked you out?” Joe asked.


“Mashed potatoes!” I exclaimed…


“What was that?” the fifth Revenge grunt asked…

“Ow, just the writer...” Joe said, as if it were the normallest thing of the world for the writer to break the fourth wall…

“What writer?” the Female Revenge grunt asked.

“Not this again!” Tim said.

(Pokémon quote)

“Gah!” the fifth Revenge grunt shouted,

“The ghost of my father! He is coming to get me!”

He ran away from the haunted place…

“Maybe if you hadn't said something, it would've past...” João said.

“And maybe you two could just butt out!” I said.

“Hey...” Tim commenced…

“We heard that!” João added.

“What is happening here?!” the Female Revenge grunt said.

“Ghosts beware, cause here's Danny Phantom...” João sang.


(You know, if you have a good knowledge of the various shows, or you actually listen to the phrase, you know where I got this quote...)


The Female Revenge grunt screamed, then jumped out of the window!


(Don't worry; their room is on the ground floor)


Joe looked out the freshly shattered window that is now actually a hole...

Then he said:

“Bye hottie...”

“Grrrr!” she grunted.

…

“I think she likes me...” Joe said,

“What do you think, ghosts? Ghosts... Phantoms?”



Complete, dead and undead, silence... When suddenly...



“Mphmphmphmphmphmphmphmphmphmphmphmphmphmph...”


Somebody muffled…

“Oh yeah, Casper and Mary...” Joe said…

Casper and Mary?!”

Joe suddenly panicked for a strange, unknown, reason…

Joe opened the door, wishing they weren't in there for long... for two or multiple reasons...


Joe sighed relieved…


Mary and Casper lied each on an opposite side of the closet, gagged and taped... Joe quickly got them out of their mummy costume...



Joe sighed happily and greeted them. “Mphmphmphmphmph, “they said. “What is it?” he replied. They screamed as loud as they could, but the tape that stuck on their mouth didn’t let any sound pass through. Suddenly he remembered that they still were gagged and helped them quickly… With a scream as consequence (he pulled the tape of their mouths)…



“Ah, my beautiful moustache!” Casper yelled.

“Ah, my lipstick!” Mary screamed,

“What moustache?”

“This one!” he said, while pointing at a few hairs on his upper lip…

“Ha! That thing?!” she laughed.

“What?! Wait a minute...” he said,

“What lipstick?”

“You don’t think my lips are this red, or do you?” Mary asked.

“No…” he said.

“Well then...” she said.

“Actually, I do,” he suddenly said.

“Well, I’ll prove it to you then,” she commenced,

“Here Joe, hold this mirror.”

“Oké... what is going on here?” Joe asked.

“Casper, come here,” she said.

“Whaza?”


Mary grabbed Casper and kissed him on the cheek!


Casper and Joe were speechless…


“Now, look in the mirror,” she said to Casper.

...

”Just look!” she said and took the mirror out of Joe's hands and held it before Caspers paralyzed face…

...

“Well...” she asked.

Casper shook his head…

“Huh?”


Mary checked both of Caspers cheeks, although she knew perfectly which cheek she kissed and where she did it... Eventually she found nada, nothing...


“Mmm... I guess I don't wear any at all...” she said.

After that, she walked downstairs…


The only thing left to solve is now.... Where did she get that mirror from?!
Magic?


Casper and Joe quickly followed her.

By the time they saw her, she was already outside...

They followed her, silently, towards the Woyell Village Gym...

A little later, they came through the door...



“Well, what are you waiting for?” Mary asked,

“Go get your Gym badge!”

Joe,

Quickly recovering from his speechlessness,

Said:

“Wait a minute...”

“What is it?” Casper asked.

“What does your Armor badge do, actually?” Joe asked.

“Oh,... yeah... I'll look it up. Wait a sec...” Casper said.

Casper thought very hard…

“Doesn't that hurt?” Joe wondered.

“Maybe with you...” Mary snapped.

“Take that back!” Joe exclaimed.

Never!” Mary answered.

“Then...” Joe commenced,

“En garde!”

“Wow... you could even remember that?” Mary asked,

Mary said with a-owner-talking-to-her-dog voice:

“Good boy!”

“Grrr... You're going down!”

The two fight

(once again)

...

“The Armor badge can teach a Pokémon, like a HM, any steel type move,” Casper red.


Joe and Mary stopped fighting...


“Wow, that's pretty cool!” Joe started.

“Awesome!” Mary added.

“Can't you teach some to your Pokémon?” Joe asked…

“I guess... but, there is one limit...” Casper said,


…

The Pokémon has to be able to learn it.”

“Well...” Mary began…


“Let me see... Nick (Starly) and Deke (Spearow) can learn Steel Wing...”

Joe became close to insanity and yelled:

“Do it!”

“Oké oké...”


A few moments later...


“And...” Joe said, while his eye was twitching,

“Did it work?”

“Yes!” Casper said.

“Then go battle the trainers and their gym leader...” Mary said.


After a dozen of trainers, they finally met up with the gym leader...



“You're pretty tough I see...” the gym leader said,

“Let's feel if there's electricity in the air!”


SECOND GYM BATTLE !

Shellos (Slug) VS. Raichu

The Gym Leader knows her Pokémon’s weakness, so instead, she orders Growls and Quick Attacks… but Slug is quicker then he looks and hits his foe with well aimed Mud-Bombs, that quickly take him (the Raichu) out…



Shellos VS. Rotom

The Gym Leader isn’t defeated (yet), because she has a last weapon of defense…
With Uproars, her Rotom severely weakens Slug, that is already tired of the last battle… He surprises friend and foe with Harden and a serie of Mud Bombs following it…


Casper has won!

A quick view over the changes:

Casper

(Slug) Lv. 13
(Nick) Lv. 9
(Deke) Lv. 9
(Lee) Lv. 10


Joe

Lv. 11
Lv. 9
Lv. 9
Lv. 10

Mary

Lv. 10
Lv. 9
Lv. 9
Lv. 9



Gym leader: By the way, my name is Electra.

“Call me.”

Electra threw a card at Casper…

Joe and Mary turned red…


“Thanks, but... Can I have my Gym badge?” Casper asked,

“It's kind of important, ya know?”

“Off course. Here it is,


With the money, of course.”


“Thanks.”



Outside the gym...



“Why do you always have to get the girls?” Joe wined.

Casper, not listening, said:

“Hey, this one is called the Battery badge and it can learn any electric move to a Pokémon.”

“Which one can learn one?” Mary asked.

“Elekid, off course,” Casper said.

“Teach him one!” Mary screamed out of near-insanity.

“Lemme see... Charge beam!” Casper said.


A few moments later...


“Yes, it worked,” Casper said.

“Good, then I can do this,” Mary said,

Then she putted her left arm forward like superman, err... ultrawoman…

“What are you doing?!” Joe asked…

“I want to go to the secret hideout of Team Revenge!” Mary proclaimed.

“So?” Joe said, not impressed.



“Like a superheroine!”

“So??” Casper said, very unimpressed.


Mary ‘grrr-ed’, then knocked them out…

“Wow, I really have strong arms...” She responded…

But what to do with these two... I can't storm the hideout on my own...


“I know something...” someone said…

“What?! Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!”



“What...” I/Matyas said.

“Just...” Tim said.

“Ate my peanut butter sandwich?!” João wrongly finished.

“You are clueless forever, aren't you?” Tim asked, rolling his eyes…

“Yes!” he said loudly, because people speak loud to look smart…

(Very weird, indeed) (Knowledge coming from Plankton, from Spongebob Squarepants)

“I thought so... Matyas, could you round it up, please?” Tim asked.

“Of course...” I said, cleared my throat, then said,

“Happened?”

This post has been edited by Scriptor Scorpio: Aug 19 2008, 07:08 AM

[Xanadu View Member Profile]

I noticed every now and then you have a mistake like this,

“Dad: Now, choose your pokémon, and begin your journey...”

I'm sure I don't have to say what is wrong there.

Sorry I haven't posted recently, life has been busy and stressful, filled with dancing alligators and Dinosaur eggs. Well, not so much the first one as the second.

And Joe's Silcoon evolved once, and then he must have de-evolved or something.

This post has been edited by Houndoom101: Feb 18 2008, 11:21 AM

[Scriptor Scorpio View Member Profile]

Ok,
I'll check it tomorrow, but now I have to go,
Ciao!

EDIT: I don't see it.

EDIT2: Ah, now I know what you mean...
But in which chapters, because it's difficult to re-read 8-9 chapters!

This post has been edited by Scriptor Scorpio: Feb 19 2008, 02:12 PM