The Legendary Link Sword

The Legendary Link Sword
Every hero has a family...

Hello everybody,
I just signed in on Pokédox to start this story with my big bro Scriptor Scorpio.
He and I will write this story together, so every time I will post a chapter, then he will,
so you get faster updates.

Ok, let's begin...


Chapter 0: Introduction!

Meet the grand family Ink.
It's so large, and everyone sees each other so much, that nicknames couldn't be far off.
So, everyone is called by the first letter of their real first name and then just the family name 'Ink' behind it.

So, Darius Ink becomes Dink, and, Mona Ink becomes 'Mink'.
The two parents lived happily in their little hut with their four children: Zaria Ink, or Zink, the oldest daughter, then the younger son Theodore Ink, or Tink, Ronaldo Ink, or Rink, then the youngest one Leonardo Ink, or Link...

Although they were quads, they held much pride in the few minutes they were born before the other. The three boys were named after died relatives, which was a tradition in the Ink family, to not have to think new names over and over again.

Now, the three brothers embark on a little trip to the old Temple of Kindred Spirits...

Please comment on the story, so I can make Chapter one even better.

Your advice will be listened to. This is my first story and topic, so don't be too hard.